Talk:Andronikos Doukas (co-emperor)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: KAVEBEAR (talk · contribs) 02:16, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
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C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
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B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
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Is it stable?
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Overall:
Pass or Fail:
It seems Konstantios Doukas, Andronikos Doukas (co-emperor) and Constantine Doukas (co-emperor) are all related and their co-reigns crossed paths with each other. Can you mention the other two in each of these respective articles?...Konstantios is mentioned. Did he have any interactions with his nephew Constantine Doukas (co-emperor) or did his elevation happen after Andronikos? -KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:19, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@KAVEBEAR: In the case of Constantine I think it would be hard to mention him any further than in the infobox while still remaining on topic. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Prose looks good. Just a few points besides the above comment.

I like the prose here. It is well written and concise. Are there any information remaining untold about Andronikos Doukas that is not on this article?
None that I have found. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Can you link the two Diogenes co-emperors? Is there a way to help readers navigate the host of co-emperors that reign during this period?
Done

Can you also list the co-emperors in the infoboxes for Romanos IV Diogenes and Constantine X Doukas like on Michael VII Doukas to help as well?KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:42, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Because they're seperate articles, I will do that when I get around to those pages. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@KAVEBEAR: Believe I have done all you have asked. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. It was just on hold for that last bit and the answers to my question. Looks good, passing now.KAVEBEAR (talk) 04:09, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]