Talk:Andrew Napolitano
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Incorrect: "allegations ... that U.S. President Barack Obama wiretapped Trump Tower."
[edit]I am unqualified to make changes so I submit this for those concerned with accuracy.
Both phrases "Obama wiretapped Trump" and "Obama wiretapped Trump Tower" are incorrect. At no time did Napolitano accuse or allege either the British or Obama of wiretapping. Ever.
What he did state is that Obama used the British agency to "go around" normal surveillance channels. That's it, as far as the Fox News interview goes. (Please listen to the interview itself.)
Evidence that neither British nor Obama / White House wiretapping was not even IMPLIED by Napolitano is unambiguously detailed in the Fox News [online] article http://www.foxnews.com/opinion/2017/03/16/andrew-napolitano-did-obama-spy-on-trump.html where he explicitly states what the unnamed sources told him: "GCHQ, most likely provided Obama with transcripts of Trump’s calls."
That's it. Not that the British wiretapped anybody. Or that the White House did. He very clearly explains that the British agency has digital access to electronic communications held in the NSA.
Thus he
1. never says that Obama ordered such.
2. never says that the White House wiretapped anything. Nor British.
3. does say that the NSA - the U.S. agency - DOES surveil communications.
4. does say that the British have access to that.
5. does say that Obama legally could have requested transcripts directly from the NSA, however there would be a record of such if he did.
6. says that sources told him that Obama was most likely provided with transcripts from the British.
Even more, he
1. never said that Obama DID do any of this. Or the British.
2. never said that his sources said Obama DID do any of this.
3. did say that "if (emphasis mine) Obama did order the NSA to prepare transcripts of Trump’s conversations ... there would exist somewhere a record."
4. did say "GCHQ, most likely (emphasis mine) provided Obama with transcripts" (per sources).
5. did say "by bypassing all American intelligence services, Obama would have had access" Note that this is stated in the hypothetical "would have had" - not that he "did".
Even the title of the online article is the speculative conjecture "Did Obama spy on Trump?" rather than the accusatory or alleging or declarative "Obama spied on Trump"
Everything above is in the online article, and nothing to the contrary is found in the broadcast interview.
So going directly to source - not the interpretation of a USA Today or NYT writer's interpretation - there's no "Obama wiretapped."
Change it to whatever you think best from direct sources. "allegations ... Obama wiretapped" is factually incorrect. Maybe "allegations that Obama obtained surveillance" ?
Thanks for all your hard work. I spend quite significant personal time preparing and sourcing and carefully proofreading this too, saving you time, and presenting it in verifiable form, so I hope you appreciate the work that I have put in, even though I am not following through with making the change itself. Being a nonmember, I suspect it would just have been reverted anyway, so I'll just leave this in your capable hands. And thank you for your time on this as well.
And perhaps this is significant - Napolitano used the word wiretap (in any form) exactly once - and that was to describe old fashioned telephone line wiretapping.24.27.72.99 (talk) 05:16, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
EDIT: Nobody wants to act upon this travesty of misinformation? So do we need to ramp up the memes of the ridiculousness of wikipedia, or does someone give a ____ about credibility and integrity?24.27.72.99 (talk) 08:19, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- I have noticed that myself right now. Especially since later im the subsection there is the following passage:
- In response to “Fox & Friends” host Brian Kilmead stating that Napolitano was claiming Trump's phone was “wiretapped”, Napolitano denied actual physical tampering, instead citing the agency has digital access to digital information.
- Kinda contradicts the whole narrative of the section. Name of that section should be refactored. 37.99.44.30 (talk) 14:25, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
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