Talk:Andrew Crofts (footballer)/GA1
GA Review
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Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
- WP:JARGON: explain words like "cap" (or any others) briefly in the text so that readers unfamiliar with the terms get a general idea of the meaning. The explanations don't need to be long, as the reader can click on the link for a more indepth definition
- I see that there is a ref for his international performance...is there one for his club performance, too?
That's it for now. The article will remain on hold for seven days for improvements. Nikki311 21:09, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments. His club performance is already fully ref'd, but the ref is against each individual season. I will look through for jargon later today..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- "Cap" is now defined within the article. I can't see any other jargon which would cause a problem even to people unfamiliar with the sport -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:23, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Okay. I see the refs now. I looked through the article again, and cap seems to be the only jargon-y word. Everything looks great, so I'll pass the article. Nikki311 01:02, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- "Cap" is now defined within the article. I can't see any other jargon which would cause a problem even to people unfamiliar with the sport -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:23, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments. His club performance is already fully ref'd, but the ref is against each individual season. I will look through for jargon later today..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)