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vociferous expansion

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Cincivideo (talk · contribs) has now twice expanded this article, but with limited success. I'm just here to explain where my edits came in.

  • There is no reason to remove reliably-sourced biographical claims from this biography, and so the prose re: Pete Ohs has been replaced.
  • The new Bard College source does not identify Sisson as a graduate. What it does say about her metriculation has now been included.
  • Regarding the "Chandelier" music video, the cited source is surprisingly opaque in its verbosity. However, reading our own article on the song, and given that Sisson isn't mentioned there anywhere, I agree with its removal. However, then, her opinions on the work aren't relevant to her biography here, but at Chandelier (song)#Music video, so I've removed the prose entirely.
  • I've removed the Fulbright duplication from the "Personal life" section, as it's more relevant in "Career" for having led to the creation of I Send You This Place.
  • The Film Independent source doesn't support a claim of permiering Everything Beautiful is Far Away.
  • The filmography tables are really unnecessary for only two entrants as (a) everything about I Send You This Place and Everything Beautiful is Far Away, as they relate to Sisson, is already in the prose; and (b) the listings for The Vision Quest™, "Everything is New", and "Blue Mountains" are unsourced and now removed IAW Wikipedia:Verifiability.
  • In the lead, claims to "being known for" anything need to be sourced and included in the body, also IAW the Verifiability policy.

I think that covers everything I changed of Cincivideo's contributions. If not, or if anybody has questions that I didn't address here, please feel welcome to ask and I'll be happy to reply here as soon as I can. — Fourthords | =Λ= | 14:12, 14 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]