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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:58, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:58, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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History

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  •  Done - I've combined some of the previous shorter paragraphs and added subheadings, breaking the history into centuries, which hopefully makes it easier to read. WaggersTALK 15:26, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • and went on to become Bishop of Killaloe and Kilfenora, Bishop of Down and Connor and subsequently Bishop of Down, Connor and Dromore Appears irrelevant to the article.
    Agreed; I've removed the extraneous detail. I'd like the article to be clear that the first rector of the church wasn't the same Richard Mant that became the bishop (as we have an article on the latter) so hopefully the revised sentence hits the right balance. WaggersTALK 10:48, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • The church building was subsequently demolished When?
    Good question! It's proved difficult to find a source that provides an answer. Most sources state or imply the building was destroyed in the 1940 bombing but source #1 says "in August 1944, with demolition of the ruin awaited...", indicating there was more demolition to be done. But I can't find a source that states when that work was done. I've adjusted the sentence in the article to be clear it's the ruins that were demolished; most of the building was already gone.
 Done WaggersTALK 15:26, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Exterior

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Sources

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That should be it. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:45, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks Sainsf, hopefully I've now address those to your satisfaction. WaggersTALK 10:48, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Waggers for your friendly response. We have only a little bit to go. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:06, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again Sainsf, how does it look now? WaggersTALK 15:26, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Awesome Waggers! I believe the article is ready for promotion. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 15:48, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]