Talk:All I Ask of You/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:19, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

and produced by Lloyd Webber → while solely produced by Webber
its lyrics serve as dialogue → its lyrics serve as a dialogue
Critically, the song → Link "Critically" to Music criticism
like in Ireland → including
where it topped the charts → ,where it topped the charts,
It was later certified in the → It was later certified Silver in the
Lloyd Webber's brother → Webber's brother
The song has been covered by various artists and musicians, most famously → You repeat yourself here. Say "A notable cover versio of "All I Ask of You" was recorded..."

Infobox

Flawless ;)

Background and release

was developed by Lloyd Webber → was developed by Webber
1910 novel The Phantom of the Opera → 1910 novel of the same name
Lloyd Webber was sued by → Webber was sued by
"The Music of the Night" → release year in brackets
Lloyd Webber in 2009, further compared → Webber in 2009, further compared
which was featured on Lloyd Webber's 1984 → which was featured on Webber's 1984
as the thirteenth track → as the 13th track
Erik (a.k.a the Phantom of the Opera) → you don't need the "(a.k.a ...)"; just say "character Erik"

Composition and lyrics

was headed by Lloyd Webber → was headed by Webber
wrote that Puccini's work is much longer → wrote that Puccini's work was much longer
contains a more vocal delivery → What do you want to say here?
when compared to Lloyd Webber's → when compared to Webber's

Reception

stated that song contains → stated that song contained
The song was later certified silver → The song was later certified Silver
"In the Army Now" → year of release in brackets
on the country's Springbok Radio chart.[17] It also charted in Australia, where according to the Kent Music Report it peaked at number 24.[18] → on the country's Springbok Radio chart,[17] while charting at number 24 in Australia, according to the Kent Music Report.[18]

Track listings

Flawless ;)

Charts

Flawless ;)

Certifications

Flawless ;)

Cover versions

recorded two other Lloyd Webber → recorded two other Webber

Barbara Streisand version

Infobox

Flawless ;)

Background and release

for her twenty-ninth studio → for her 29th studio
I could find no ther flaw ;)

Reception

single "Memory" and later wrote → Unlink "Memory", as noted before
entering the region at number 79 → just remove "the region"
and spent five weeks charting altogether → "altogether" is superfluous

Track listings and formats

Flawless ;)

Charts

Flawless ;)

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

Very good and informative article! It was really an interesting reading! On hold for 7 days... Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:47, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cartoon network freak – Thanks for the review. I addressed all of your concerns. And just to clarify, the 'Lloyd' in 'Lloyd Webber' is legally part of his last name so 'Lloyd' should be included in all instances where his last name is used. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 19:04, 31 December 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:36, 31 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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