Talk:Alien (Britney Spears song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 17:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
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Overview
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— Two to correct (Tips: Substitute the URL of the second link and archive the first.)
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Prose
[edit]- Lead
— "It is scheduled to be released in 2014 by RCA Records as a single from the record." (Move this to the end of the first paragraph)
Done
— The part referring to the album reception is unnecessary considering the scope of the article. (Only the 'Despite...' part)
Done
- Background
— "The song was recorded on August 5, 2013." (Unsourced)
Done
- Composition
— "Mid-tempo" doesn't need a hyphen. — What reference supports it being a dance-pop midtempo number? If there is one it should be next to that part of the text.
Done
- Critical reception
— "shared a similar sentiment, expressed" → "expressing" — Try to paraphrase the section a bit; right now it is kind of a quote farm.
Done
- References
— FN13 has an incorrect title.
Done
— Digital Spy's publisher is Hearst Magazines UK.
Done
— The Huffington Post shouldn't be italicized.
Done
File usage
[edit]— One image that has OTRS ticket to confirm permission. Checks out okay.
Review history
[edit]— April 15, 2014: Review. prism△ 17:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)