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A fact from Alberto Heredia (sculptor) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 17 March 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Argentine sculptor Alberto Heredia protested censorship through his art and was forced into exile by a right-wing death squad?

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:13, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that after denouncing violence and censorship in Argentina, sculptor Alberto Heredia was exiled and threatened with death by the Argentine Anticommunist Alliance? Source: Buccellato, Laura (1998). Alberto Heredia Retrospectiva. Buenos Aires: Delmiro Mendez e Hijo. pp. 108–109 https://www.ambito.com/edicion-impresa/alberto-heredia-la-memoria-del-horror-n4001279 ("en 1974, y en diciembre de ese mismo año recibió una carta de la Triple A donde le comunicaban su condena a muerte si no abandonaba "nuestra bendita patria" al día 12 de enero de 1975 "del año del Señor". Lo acusaban de ser un "activista comunista de la élite artística de la Internacional de París", "un ateo criminal" y un "vicioso homosexual y drogadicto". La carta se encuentra hoy en el archivo del artista.")
- ALT1: ... that after denouncing violence and censorship in Argentina, sculptor Alberto Heredia was branded a drug-addicted atheist extremist and threatened with death by AAA? Source: same as above
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lazar Bicherakhov

Created by Mamarkillie (talk) and BuySomeApples (talk). Nominated by BuySomeApples (talk) at 07:19, 22 February 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - ? Based on the sources provided I don't see the exact reason why the death squad threatened Heredia, nor does it refer to him as an "extremist"
Interesting:
Other problems: - See below

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The hooks may confuse readers who aren't familiar with AAA. Just referring to it as a right-wing death squad is more obvious. (t · c) buidhe 09:47, 22 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Alt2: ... that Argentine sculptor Alberto Heredia was branded a communist, atheist, drug addict and homosexual and forced into exile by a right-wing death squad?

@Buidhe: thanks for the review! The book is the one which mentions why they targeted him, not the article which is quoted. ALT1 was supposed to be kind of vague, since some readers might at first think of a different AAA. I'm OK with using a different hook, but I think it's important to link the Triple A page for context. What do you think of ALT3? I also like ALT2. BuySomeApples (talk) 10:12, 22 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

ALT3: ... that Argentine sculptor Alberto Heredia protested censorship through his art and was forced into exile by a right-wing death squad?
- The article is passed but we need a nother reviewer for the new hooks. (t · c) buidhe 18:47, 22 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  - All hooks are sourced, neutral, and of appropriate length. The newer ones are definitely clearer - ALT3 is punchiest, I think. Also double-checked article. Approved. ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 23:01, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]