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Good articleAlbert G. Mumma has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 7, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 10, 2013.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Albert G. Mumma was part of a 75-man force from the Alsos Mission and 30 Assault Unit that captured the 150,000-man garrison of Kiel during World War II?

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:31, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Early life: Philippines needs to be linked on first reference.
  • "His younger brother George graduated with the class of 1934, but resigned later that year. He later became a major in the Army during World War II." -- The second "he" here is unclear as to whether you're referring to the subject of this article or to his brother.
  • "Mumma's class at Annapolis were the first one..." -- "class" in this context refers to the singular body as a whole, so his class was the first. Alternatively, you could state, "The cadets in Mumma's class at Annapolis were the first ones..."
  • "He reported to his next ship, which was the cruiser USS Chicago (CA-29)..." this is the only ship in the article with a visible hull symbol. Should be standardized.
  • World War II: "ultra secret security clearances" should be linked.
  • Duplicate links tool returns one result: destroyer. No problems with external links or dab links.
  • Article is illustrated by one image with appropriate licensing. No problems with stability are apparent, though a majority of the footnotes are sourced to what appear to be primary sources, which might present an issue at any future A or FA review.
On hold pending fixes. —Ed!(talk) 16:42, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Very good. Passing the article for GA, well done. —Ed!(talk) 21:06, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]