Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2023/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:14, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've copy-edited the article for some changes I felt were uncontroversial instead of listing them here.
"This marked the 11th occasion that Albania qualified for the final, having participated a total of 19 times" to "This was the 11th occasion that Albania had qualified for the final, out of the 19 times it had participated in Eurovision"
"the nation had participated in the Eurovision Song Contest 18 times since its first entry in 2004" I'd rewrite this "the nation had participated in every edition of the Eurovision Song Contest since its first entry in 2004."
"The second-highest placement was attained in 2004, with the song "The Image of You" by Anjeza Shahini, resulting in the seventh position." to "Its second-highest finish was seventh place in 2004, with the song "The Image of You" by Anjeza Shahini."
"Throughout its...instance of non-qualification" to "Albania had previously failed to qualify for the final on nine occasions, most recently in 2022."
Images and references are okay. Spot-checks revealed no issues that I could find. AGF-ing on Albanian language refs.
Not required at the GA level, but the Albanian refs should have a translated title in English.
That's all I got.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Hi @AryKun: I've made most of the requested changes plus some additional copyedits and expansions to address some missing aspects. Please check it out. Grk1011 (talk) 21:04, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]