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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk08:13, 28 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Bruxton (talk). Self-nominated at 17:26, 30 January 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Alan and Naomi (novel), so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

  • Article is new and long enough, properly referenced, and QPQ is done. However, I'm not sure what's entirely interesting about a YA novel about the Holocaust (or the fact that it's been adapted to other media, as many other books have). The "History" section doesn't really enlighten the reader either and seems to lift much of its content from the lede. KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 19:50, 1 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. My style of writing is to tell you what the article is about in the lead, then I expound on that information within the body with references. Regarding the content, I think I have said all that can be said. For an alternative ALT, I will provide an alternate. Keeping in mind C6 that the hook has to involve the real world. I also welcome suggestions.
  • ALT1: ... that the novel Alan and Naomi has been called, "one of the starkest representations of trauma and traumatic loss"? Tribunella, Eric L. (2010). Melancholia and maturation : the use of trauma in American children's literature (1st ed.). Knoxville: University of Tennessee Press. p. 121. ISBN 978-1572336810.
Forgot the ping @Kingoflettuce: Bruxton (talk) 23:57, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I'm okay with the Alt. Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 09:47, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]