Talk:Alan Pringle/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:29, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 20:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 12:51, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Will review soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"played one season" one game.
- Fixed.
He went to Rugby High School for Girls?
- As weird as that is, it looks right. The article on the school says It takes girls aged 11–18 and boys 16–18.
"He later moved to England where he attended" comma after England.
- Added.
That's all. Not much to say about this guy. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 12:52, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@WikiOriginal-9: Responded. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:47, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Can you put the high school in the body please? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 15:03, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@WikiOriginal-9: Do you mean I should say He later moved to England, where he attended Rugby High School for Girls instead of He later moved to England, where he attended Rugby High School? The body already has the latter sentence. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nevermind. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:27, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:27, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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