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Requested Edits/Updates for Alan Greenberg

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Hi again Wikipedia. I work with Alan Greenberg and can’t make any of these edits due to my COI. Can someone help with these?

Thank you, LeannaTruong (talk) 13:31, 19 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please see my message on your talk page. GSS💬 16:10, 19 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, GSS - I left you a few messages. Feel free to respond back on your direct Talk page. LeannaTruong (talk) 17:00, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, Wikipedia. Apologies for the second follow-up as I was hoping to make one last adjustment in addition to my edit requests above.

Thank you! LeannaTruong (talk) 17:00, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey LeannaTruong, did you answer GSS' questions? I pinged you on my Talk page. Please list out all the clients you have submitted requests for.
Going through all these request. Going bottom to top:
  • I'm not sure "immersive entertainment" is a real company type (vs their branding) but I can look at other articles on Wikipedia. Can you check too?
  • I'm fine with "virtual safari," but including the brand name will violate WP:BRAND.
  • That CCI source is a WP:PRIMARY source (as its their award). Let me see if I can find a Third-Party one.
  • "Nationally recognized turnaround" is pretty promotional. Let me check what is discussed on the Esquire Magazine article.
Rest looks good.
--FeldBum (talk) 21:48, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hey FeldBum. I went ahead and answered both yours and GSS comments. If you refer to my User Page, I listed out the clients I support and the agency I represent. Thanks for your feedback! I found a few things, hopefully this helps.
  • For "Immersive entertainment", I found another user Darren Lynn Bousman includes "immersive experiences" as well as the Van Gogh immersive experiences. Does that help/work?
  • Let's go ahead and remove the brand name in reference to "virtual safari". I don't want to violate Wiki brand guidelines
Other points make sense! Thank you for your help. Let me know how else I can help or if you're all set.
-- LeannaTruong (talk) 15:33, 26 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hey FeldBum. Checking on the above. Let me know if there's any additional information you need to finalize. LeannaTruong (talk) 21:41, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hey LeannaTruong, made these updates with some rewrites as per my points. Unless you have a source for CCI, I'll keep this answered. --FeldBum (talk) 03:12, 6 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Additional Edit Requests, Alan Greenberg

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Hi again FeldBum. Thanks again for helping me earlier – you were SUPER helpful. Following up as there seems a few more small edits I need to update. Can you help me? See below.

Let me know if anything seems confusing. Thank you again! LeannaTruong (talk) 14:47, 12 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey LeannaTruong, taking a look at these. In the future, you need to add the Edit Request tag to your posts aside from just tagging me (even though I'm happy to help).
Is "Illuminarium Experiences" the official name? Looks like it. I'll change.
Hotel Beds line and Chris Whittle look fine. I'll probably say "education executive" since that's what his Wiki page says. Partners looks good too.
--FeldBum (talk) 18:58, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
OK, done. Ping, LeannaTruong. --FeldBum (talk) 19:18, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Updated Edit Request

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Hi again Wikipedia, Can you help me with some more edits for Alan? I work for Alan and have a COI. Time has passed and some things are out of date. I’d also like to add a section about Illuminarium to the page.

Can you help with these edits:

Thank you! LeannaTruong (talk) 22:45, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again LeannaTruong, happy to help with this page again. There's a lot here and I'm a little worried about coatracking, or adding too much to this page about a different subject. I'll start with what should definitely be here and consider a dedicated page for Illuminarium too. Something like new openings and the bar are definitely beyond the scope of a page about Greenberg. --FeldBum (talk) 16:24, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @LeannaTruong:, I'm closing this and working on a new page here --FeldBum (talk) 15:17, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ping @LeannaTruong:, I think the page I wrote looks good. Take a look. --FeldBum (talk) 04:13, 5 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]