Talk:Alan Berg (global nutrition advocate)

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	This article was accepted on 12 January 2014 by reviewer Alanl (talk · contribs).

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Removed Awards section

Hello @Theroadislong,

Regarding the awards, most are covered in Levinson, James (2013). "Vital to the Creation: Interview with Alan Berg". Development (Page 32 for the "Voices Who Have Changed Nutrition" award, page 27 for the "William A. Jump" award) . There is also this reference (page 121), a more ideal one to back up the United Nations Achievement Award for Lifelong Service to Nutrition.

For "Berg was also was recognized for the project conception and development of "Bon Appétit!", the nutrition-themed 2003 Grammy Award-winning Best Musical Album for Children.", this Dayton Daily News article is a much better reference I have just uncovered (Dayton Daily News, 16 Feb 2004, page 14).

On the other hand, it seems as if Berg is not a nutrionist. He is not referred to as such in any of the sources. "Alan Berg (international development authority)" is way too long. Any suggestions? The category "American nutrionists" might warrant removal. "American public servants" is one that should be added.

Thank you! Mooonswimmer 23:39, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Berg is not a nutrionist. He is not referred to as such in any of the sources. "Alan Berg (international development authority)" is way too long. Does anyone have any suggestions? Mooonswimmer 15:12, 28 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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