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Awesome

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@Mlaboda: This is a fantastic start on an article. Great work! —mako 23:49, 19 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Great Information

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This article is very well written and organized. The section talking about their safety record felt a bit editorial, so I edited the copy to sound more neutral and added bullets. Great job @Mlaboda:!Yoginih (talk) 21:30, 24 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'd go a bit further and suggest rewriting the sentence to say "Since 1982, Airlift Northwest has had three incidents" (which avoids using the phrase "safety record entirely" while still giving the impression that the incidents are relatively uncommon. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:04, 27 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Perfect, Adam (Wiki Ed)! Thank you so much! Mlaboda (talk) 15:58, 28 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]