Talk:Air Berlin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 14:12, 29 July 2012 (UTC) A quick fail. Giving issues in next edit. TheSpecialUser ^TSU 14:12, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It was a rushed nomination by an IP address. This article is nowhere near to get to GA status. Here are just few issues that I see: Neutrality- The article is no written in a neutral way. There are peacock terms, and also promotional lines which need to be re-written. Prose is pretty bad and need throughout copyediting. Refs- many facts are not sourced and many are un-reliable sources. This is just an 10 second review. If wen't deep under, many issues exist. Thus I'm failing it. If someone wants a detailed reason for quick-fail, feel free to ping me on my talk. TheSpecialUser ^TSU 14:31, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]