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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:48, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


This shouldn't take me long. JAGUAR  11:48, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Bearing in mind that this article is short, the lead seems to be an appropriate length
  • " He was released by the Express shortly before the end of the season" - which season? What year?
    • Fixed to "He was released by the Express in 2016, shortly..."
  • "After his sophomore season at IUPUI Moss transferred to the University of Indianapolis" - comma needed in between IUPUI and Moss
    • Comma has been added.
  • "In February 2015 he was signed by the Windsor Express.[26] He was released by the Express on March 26, 2015" - should be merged into one sentence to improve flow: In February 2015 he was signed by the Windsor Express, and was released by the Express on March 26, 2015
    • Fixed with your suggested sentence.
  • No dead links

Very short review, very short article. Will leave this on hold until the minor issues are dealt with, then this should pass. JAGUAR  12:14, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: Thank you for reviewing. All issues brought up have been addressed. TempleM (talk) 19:21, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
JAGUAR  19:36, 14 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]