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Reviewer: Robin (talk · contribs) 12:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- I'll review this nomination. — Robin (talk) 12:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- I'll be taking care of this. — DivaKnockouts 20:24, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
- Refs
- ref 3 AllMusic is written with a capital m, and add its publisher, Rovi Corporation.
Done
- ref 5 link El Universal (Mexico City)
Done
- Lead
- Delink Adentro tour as it doesn't have an article.
Done
- Recording
- On an interview -- In which interview?
Done
- I re-titled this section because the sub-section wasn't needed (too small) and included more background information than compositional information.
- These sentences - The song received negative response due to its theme, on which the singer commented that the song had "the most beautiful lyrics from Adentro,"[7][8] further stating that "more than hitting me, they [the criticism] saddens me."[8] He also stated that "criticism is a symptom of envy. - Lack clarity and seem to be translated from Spanish. I suggest removing it completely or re-structure the sentencing and move it to the critical reception section, where it belongs.
Done.
- Tour and Fundacion Adentro
- The foundation, as stated, doesn't have anything to do with the album except for sharing the same name. Remove.
Not done, the foundation, as stated, is named after the album.
- Okay, thanks! — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
- I think this section should be merged with the singles' section, to give the article more body.
Done
- Commercial performance
- the album became Arjona's third album to do so -- do what?
Done, I believe he was hinting at being certified in Argentina.
- Critical reception
- Too many quotes - try writing most of them in your own words.
Done
- Delink AllMusic as it is linked in the recording section.
Done
On hold. — Robin (talk) 13:55, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- All done! — DivaKnockouts 20:24, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
- I gave the article one last copy-edit. — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
- By the way, this is very thoughtful of you, DivaKnockouts! — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
- Passing. — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for that Robin! Regards. — DivaKnockouts 18:04, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
- Passing. — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)