Talk:Abu'l-Aswar Shavur ibn Fadl/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 2 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:27, 2 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK
~~daughter and her treasure ad retinue~~
~~Fix the title case in Bosworth.~~
Images appropriately licensed.

As usual, thanks for the review, Sturmvogel 66. Other than the purely technical stuff, how did it read? It is the first article I write on the area in this period of history, and given its relative obscurity I'd like to have some feedback on whether the context is enough for the uninitiated. Constantine ✍ 12:47, 18 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I thought it was fine, but I'm a little more knowledgeable about the Byzantines than I am about the Arabs on who you normally write, so I may not be a typical reader.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:56, 18 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]