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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:A Newsboy Hero/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Another Marie article. I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR  22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article
  • I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
  • "His alcoholism had caused much strife in his home and his wife" - informal
  • Salvation Army could be linked in the lead
  • " The Billboard‍ '​ review" - typo

Close - promoted

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I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done JAGUAR  22:36, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]