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GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • No dab links or dead ELs

Background and composition

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  • "A Little Bit" lasts for three minutes and forty-seven seconds. – is this really needed? If it is, reword to remove "lasts for" - colloquialish
 Done
  • The sheet music analysis needs attribution ie 'According to blah..
 Done

Reception

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  • "But, Chuck Campbell..." 'but' → however
 Done
  • Are there any more reviews? Look through all the reviews from the album on Metacritic
Album is not present in Metacritic. I searched everywhere.
  • "The song debuted at number sixty-two in Australia" - on what?
 Done On ARIA Charts.

Music video

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  • A lot of this section is "The music video..." "the video..." Vary it a bit. Merge the two paragraphs.
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  • The synopsis needs a decent copy-edit in terms of prose quality
I'll ask someone to copy-edit.
 Done
  • "The video reached number seven on Total Request Live countdown." the Total Request Live countdown?
 Done

Live performances and cover version

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  • "She wore a white top and plaid pants for the performance. She also put on a red hat, and a red tie" - merge
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  • You mention the poles twice
 Done Removed the duplicate.
  • The cover should have its own level two section at the bottom of the article (just before refs), and needs expansion - particularly with reception
I have very few information on the cover. Will try to find out more.
 Done

Credits and personnel

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  • More wikifying, please
 Done

Summary

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A good start, but a way to go. On hold, awaiting improvements. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments

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  • Source the concert synopsis
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  • Because there is not much in the way of chartings, expand the current info to include the number of weeks etc.
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Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:55, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I would suggest removing the two chart position tables as they give no new information and are a bit confusing. The cover needs more info, particularly critical reception, and also needs some basic info like release date/other info and director of video. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:29, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Removed the tables. Novice7 | Talk 03:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Added a review. But, couldn't find the director. Novice7 | Talk 11:27, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The release date/label needs a reference, then I think we'll be done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:08, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Added (allmusic). Novice7 | Talk 03:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
OK, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:49, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]