Talk:9×19mm Parabellum
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"Improvements"
[edit]I'm not sure that the article has been "improved" by last August's removal of swathes of information on the basis that it's unsourced; the information in question seemed more useful than not and its absence is quite conspicuous, i.e. I ended up having to look at the history to see why the origins section seemed to just start mid-explanation. Now I know. Should it perhaps be restored with {{cite}} tags as necessary? --Vometia (talk) 06:02, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
- I restored the two deleted paragraphs. They are not unsourced as they, along with the third paragraph, are all a summary of the source cited at the end of the third paragraph. There is zero requirement that a passage summarizing material from a reliable source consist solely of a single paragraph, and there is nothing wrong with using a single citation for a couple of short paragraphs, so the passage is already properly sourced, and the removal was borderline vandalism. oknazevad (talk) 10:45, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you. :) --Vometia (talk) 17:05, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
9mm Can Wound Humans
[edit]It says (uncited):
"Proponents of the hydrostatic shock theory contend that the energy of the 9mm cartridge is capable of imparting remote wounding effects in human-sized living targets."
Are there others that contend that this bullet can't wound "human-sized living targets" remotely? Is there something missing from the sentence? No way to tell, because whoever added it didn't bother to cite. MrDemeanour (talk) 11:33, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- It's seems like one of those pseudo-intellectual attempts at sounding scientific for basically saying "this can put holes in people from a distance". It's a meaningless and useless phrase that applies to all bullets. It not only can be removed, it should be removed because including it makes the article look ridiculous. oknazevad (talk) 14:09, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- Given that the whole point of a bullet is to wound "human-sized living targets" it's a pointless thing to say, whether sourced or not. Being bold and removing. I might be more convinced to leave it included (if cited) on a page about spoons - for example - but not bullets. Chaheel Riens (talk) 14:28, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- @MrDemeanour, Oknazevad, and Chaheel Riens: You seem to have misunderstood what it's about, it's not about "remotely" as in from a distance (from the target) but as in distant within the body, i.e. causing damage in other parts of the body than where the bullet hit, through a shock wave moving through body tissue. See Hydrostatic shock:
Hydrostatic shock is the controversial concept that a penetrating projectile (such as a bullet) can produce a pressure wave that causes "remote neural damage"
. Drachentöter001 (talk) 17:43, 19 September 2023 (UTC)- Fair point, although I can't help but feel that hydrostatic shock injury might not be uppermost in the mind of somebody who's just been shot with a 9mm round. Also I think the key phrase there is
...the controversial concept that...
- if it were to stay, (and I'm not advocating that it does) it would need considerable rewriting and sourcing so it doesn't sound so hoighty-toighty. Chaheel Riens (talk) 17:49, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- Fair point, although I can't help but feel that hydrostatic shock injury might not be uppermost in the mind of somebody who's just been shot with a 9mm round. Also I think the key phrase there is
- @MrDemeanour, Oknazevad, and Chaheel Riens: You seem to have misunderstood what it's about, it's not about "remotely" as in from a distance (from the target) but as in distant within the body, i.e. causing damage in other parts of the body than where the bullet hit, through a shock wave moving through body tissue. See Hydrostatic shock:
SESAMS??
[edit]Probably best not to throw around obscure acronyms without any explanation. I have no idea what SESAMS is and I am pretty knowledgeable about weapons and ammunition. Searching for the term, I came up with "Semiconductor saturable absorber mirror", "Society for Simulation in Europe", "Strength assessment of offshore structures", "A relational database developed by Fujitsu Siemens", "a structural analysis software", "a Scandinavian internet search engine", and "Sequence saturation mutagenesis." - none of which seemed remotely relevant. DrHenley (talk) 19:37, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- It's apparently a term for simulated ammunition: Special Effects Small Arms Marking System (SESAM). Regardless, the first source in that paragraph is a dead link, and the second does not mention this acronym, so I removed the section outright as unsourced. — The Hand That Feeds You:Bite 19:44, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
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