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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:37, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox
  • NYCL registration number needs cited.
    •  Done
  • Maybe add in that it's a contributing property somewhere? There's a way to do it as sort of a banner bar, see Mathew H. Ritchey House for an example
    •  Done
Site
Design
History
  • "The Nassau National Bank Upon Silliman's 1901 death, American Architect and Building News called the building "popular and profitable" - It honestly looks like you started to say something about the Nassau National Bank, but didn't make it further than the first four words
  • What happened to the building between 1915 and 1942? That's a big gap
  • "The property's mortgage was held by the Emigrant Industrial Savings Bank, which took over the building in 1942." - By the bank taking over, is this meaning it was foreclosed on?
  • What's the exact date of the NRHP contributing property listing? Only the year is given
    • plus Added
  • " film shoots for crime TV series such as White Collar," - Maybe it's just my system, but White Collar is perpetually underlined for me, which doesn't seem to make much sense
  • "the last two events to take place in the building was H&M's fashion show in October 2012 and Proenza Schouler's fashion show in September 2013" - Were, not was
    •  Done
  • " By October 2017, all except nine of the condominiums had been sold" - Anything happen after this point? It's only three years, but it's still possible something has occurred of note with the building

Referencing looks fine, except for the one failed spot check above, all of the other spot checks were clean. Image licensing looks correct. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 17:51, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: Thanks for the review and for your patience. Had I seen these errors earlier, I would've fixed them before nominating the page! I've addressed all these now. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.