Talk:41st Guards Rocket Division/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:47, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:47, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

• Lead and infobox;
  • Link "68th Anti-Aircraft Artillery Division" "216th Rocket Brigade"; even if they are red links

• The existence of those units is covered in the body and would be a self link if they were linked.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • Intercontinental ballistic missiles from there; remove initial capital

• Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • Per MOS:FLAGICON, remove thumbnails and icons from the infobox

• Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• Section 1;
  • What is "RGK"? Never mentioned before

• Done.Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • "AA" has to be defined in the braces on the first mention of "Anti-Aircraft"

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • and was commanded by -> under the command of

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • January and February 1945 -> January–February 1945

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • In February and March -> In February–March

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • 910 of its soldiers

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • two (Brusov and Andryushok) were made Heroes of the Soviet Union; also please be clear whether the above count includes these two as well or not

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• Section 2;
  • introduction of Intercontinental ballistic missiles; remove the initial capital, and link the entire phrase, you've missed the "s" in the ending

• Done. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• • Colonel Konstantin Glushich; why a red link has been given to this, a colonel is notable.

• @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: All RVSN generals have pretty detailed biographies available and Glushich was later promoted to Major General. Kges1901 (talk) 18:08, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• Images OK, no plagiarism found.

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 15:06, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:23, 19 November 2017 (UTC)