Talk:37th Battalion (New Zealand)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 04:04, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox
- Some content about the honours in the lead
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- 1941–45 is to be 1941–1945, per MOS:DATERANGE
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Wikipedia doesn't have an article on Sudgen, so he isn't notable, but the only commander. Reword
  - Deleted Sudgen from infobox, the note (on first mention of Sudgen) states he was only commander of the battalion. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Section 1;
- A.H.L. Sugden -> A. H. L. Sugden, per WP:NAMES
  - Wow, you really do know the MOS! Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- machine-gun; drop -
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- basic context on President Coolidge, type and country
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- the ship captured -> the ship was captured
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- USS Rotanin; to maitain consistency just Rotanin, mention the basic context
  - Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Section 2;
- 1942–44 -> 1942–1944
  - I haven't done this one; it is a direct quote from the honours page so I don't think it needs to comply with the MOS. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
16.5% confidence, violation unlikely

Krishna, thanks for the review, have made edits and comments as appropriate. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 03:45, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]