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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 09:46, 3 July 2011 (UTC)
- Lead
- "First broadcast on" is that the right tense?
Done Changed to "Premiered"
- "the show
ran forspanned 192 episodes"Done
- "while a feature film of the same name is"
Undone please wikify "feature film of the same name"
Done
- "Bauer is the only character to have appeared in all eight seasons, as well as appearing in every episode of the series." → "Bauer is the only character to have appeared in every episode of the series." This automatically means that only Bauer has appeared in all eight seasons.
Done
- "begins with
himhis working" See User:Tony1/Noun plus -ingDone
- "Los Angeles-based" and "highly-proficient" addition of hyphens
Done
- "Jack Bauer's racing" addition of "'s"
Done
- "conspiracies which deals
ingwith"Done
- "including the Best Drama Series" is the necessary, since "Best Drama Series" is an award?
Done
- Premise
- why's "24" in bold face?
Done
- I suggest "24 is a serial drama which stars
ringKiefer Sutherland as Jack Bauer,which focusesfocusing on the efforts of the fictional Counter Terrorist Unit"Done
- Overview
- wikify "the Balkans"
Done
- "end of the second season's"
Done
- missing commas in "his new boss Secretary of Defense James Heller and"
- good summary of the seasons. No further action required.
- Conception
- "Woodland Hills, Los Angeles, to" missing comma
Done
- "The episode had a $4 million budget, with the start of filming
beginningin March 2001"Done
- Design
- "
Furthermore,a secondary storywilloften takes place outside of the main plot." Past tenseDone
- "smaller, silent, clock
displayalso"Done
- "The duration of each episode without commercials is approximately 43 minutes" source?
Done removed
- Setting
- wikify "South Africa" and "Sangala"
Done Wikified South Africa, Sangala not wikified, as it doesn't exist.
- "with
these'Domestic'" these sounds informalDone altered wording
- "While CTU itself is a fictional agency, several entities with similar names or duties, like the National Counterterrorism Center, have emerged since the show's debut on television." source? Sounds like original research.
Done ref added.
- White House bunker shown in season 6
, were also filmed here."Done
- Series conclusion
- "was issued from Fox which explained
ing"Done
- reads well
- Relation to other productions
- "
LikeSimilar to the 1997 film, Air Force One,"Done
- Feature film
- "Series co-creators Joel Surnow" Already
Done
- wikify "Prague" and "Morocco"
Done
- Cast and characters
- reads well. No actions required
- Reaction
- "torture as normal,[41] effective,[42] acceptable and glamorous,[43]" move all refs to after glamourous
Done
- "in torture in future seasons" future, or subsequent?
Done
- Ratings
- "after many fans
grewbecame unhappy with constant interruptions." source?Done removed
- "four-hour premiere increased viewership by 15%
in viewers"Done
- Awards and nominations
- "24 won and was nominated for several television awards including" → "24 was nominated for and won several television awards including"
Done
- "68 Emmy nominations,[67] with 20 wins.[68]" move ref to end of sentence.
Done
- Television
- no actions required
- Home media
- "strictly emphasized"
Done
- paragraphs 2, 3 and 4 are unsourced. Reference it, or trim it down then reference the remainng text.
Done removed, can't find any refs for any of it.
- Other media
- "The success of 24 led to the extension of the series
being extended"Done
- "as well as a number of "behind-the-scenes" books." source? There's a video, you told me that, but no books.
Done ref added
- References, further reading and images
- please add alt text to images. I know it's not a GA requirement, but do it anyway, for the sake of vision-impaired users. See WP:ALT
Done
- "Steven Keslowitz, The Simpsons, 24, and the Law: How Homer Simpson and Jack Bauer Influence Congressional Lawmaking and Judicial Reasoning, " why isn't the title italicised?
Done
- no damaged links, no action required.
Assessment
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- I'm happy with the article. It's an informative read, and adheres to every GA criterion. Very happy with Steven Zhang's effort and resilience on the article, and I hope he can improve this article enough for the Star.
Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 09:27, 4 July 2011 (UTC)