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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 04:27, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:27, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Images appropriately licensed
  • situation that generally impacted morale adversely
  • opened fire with shell and machine gun awkward
  • While two tanks were taken out of action knocked out of action
  • allied invasion of Sicily Capitalize Allied
  • Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:09, 9 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the review so far, I have tweak the article in the places suggested above. I hope the changes work? EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 01:15, 10 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]