Talk:2023 International Conference on Climate Resilient Pakistan

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Did you know... that attendees from forty countries and financial institutions at the 2023 International Conference on Climate Resilient Pakistan pledged more than US$9 billion for flood recovery?

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:57, 25 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the United Nations and the Government of Pakistan co-hosted the 2023 International Conference on Climate Resilient Pakistan in Geneva to aid Pakistani people after the 2022 Pakistan floods? Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that more than 450 attendees from 40 countries and international financial institutions pledged more than $9bn for Pakistani flood recovery in Geneva? Source: [2]
- ALT1a: ... that attendees from 40 countries and financial institutions at the 2023 International Conference on Climate Resilient Pakistan pledged more than $9bn for flood recovery in January 2023? Source: [3]
- ALT2: ... that Pakistan presented the 4RF Plan to the world in Geneva for recovery and reconstruction to secure international support after the 2022 Pakistan floods? Source: [4]
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Created by M.Ashraf333 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:46, 11 January 2023 (UTC).[reply]

@M.Ashraf333: I have fixed several grammatical errors in the hooks. – dudhhr^talk _contribs (he/they) 16:01, 11 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: New, right up to date (Jan. 2023 event answering 2022 flooding), interesting - notably that so much funding could be raised in this one event, 9 billion, above the target 50% of 16.3 billion. Earwig detected mostly lengthy repeated names. QPQ seems to be a n.a. situation. So... Hooks ALT1 and ALT2 look possible, Hook 0 is accurate but less "hook-y". I would consider something like Hook1a, which avoids Hook1's "Easter egg" link piping mixing the event, which really should be visible in the prime link, with attendee numbers. Hook2 is tidy but uses an acronym (4RF) which most readers will not recognise. Nice work. SeoR (talk) 16:51, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hook citation checked and improved - sorry for any gaps. Alt0 was fully covered, but Alts 1 and 1a are better covered now, and Alt2 lacked the required end-of-sentence cite, now in place (it is clearly covered by the Al Jazeera report). Thanks for the prompt. SeoR (talk) 13:44, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]