Jump to content

Talk:2021 Tour Championship/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:54, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review MWright96 (talk) 18:54, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

[edit]

Overview

[edit]

Qualification

[edit]

Quarter-finals

[edit]
  • Wikilink the term session to the relevant article on the first mention
  • "O'Sullivan pulled ahead by three to 8–5 later in the match, " - three frames
  • "O'Sullivan then made a break of 101, the 1,100th century break of his career.[14][18]" - reference 14 is not needed at the end of this sentence since it does not mention this fact
  • "O'Sullivan won the match in frame 18, after Higgins missed a pot on the yellow ball.[14][18]" - same issue as above
  • "Robertson won the opening frame, but Lisowski won the second," - needs verifying since the Eurosport reference at the end of this sentence does not explicitly mention this
  • "Robertson won the opening frame, but Lisowski won the second," - repetition of "won"
  • "Selby also won the next two frames with breaks of 81 and 54." - Eurosport only mentioned a "half-century" but the Reference 23 World Snooker source does mention this fact
  • "Barring the Snooker Shoot Out, a one-frame tournament, this was the only tournament in the season Wilson had not scored a single century break." - repetition of "tournament"
  • "Judd Trump met Barry Hawkins in the final quarter-final." - repetition of "final"
  • "making a break of 112 in frame four." - World Snooker states the break was 119
  • "The next three frames were won by Hawkins, before Trump won frame eight to trail 3–5." - repetition of "won"
  • "Hawkins won the next two frames including break of 61 to lead 9–6." - including a break
  • "Hawkins won the match after potting a long brown ball to finish 10–7 ahead." - better; Hawkins won the match 10–7 after potting a long brown ball.

Semi-finals

[edit]
  • "The semi-finals were played on 26 and 27 March." - needs to be verified by a reliable source
  • "including a break if 114." - of
  • "In the third, Selby made a series of errors" - a word is missing between "third" and the comma
  • "Selby won the next frame, but Roberston won frame 13 to win the match 10–3." - too many uses of the word "win/won" in a single sentence
  • "In frame 16, Hawkins lead with a break of 46," - spelling error; should be led
  • "but O'Sullivan won the frame with a break of 71, and won the next with a break of 90 to trail 8–9." - repetition of "won"

Final

[edit]
  • "O'Sullivan made only 26 points to Robertsons 650." - O'Sullivan acculmated only 26 points to Robertson's 650.
  • "having never lost more than three in a row prviously.[47][45]" - refs in numerical order, please; also spelling error in "prviously"
  • "but commented that the performance put him in good standing for the world championships." - championship.
  • "In winning the event, Robertson was also able to win the Cazoo Cup." - repetition of "win"

Cazoo Cup

[edit]

References

[edit]

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 20:17, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That should be everything addressed MWright96. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:43, 7 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Lee Vilenski: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 08:02, 7 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]