Talk:2020 NFL season/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:08, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 11:17, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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So, I took a good look over this article, but it simply isn't an encyclopedicly written article. It's full of cruft, lots of information about "notable" retirees and deaths, as if we should be making that claim. There's so much uncited, and it's not written for someone who is not familiar with the subject. Article suffers a lot from WP:INSICRIMINATE information, especially when so much is uncited. I'd be happy to look at this article when it's in better shape, but for now it's a quick fail for not being consise, having so much uncited and not well written. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:08, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:17, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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