Talk:2017 Atlantic hurricane season/GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 03:21, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Will do Noah^Talk 03:21, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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One thing I noticed just skimming the references is that some have a Y-M-D format while others are M D, Y. I will try to do the rest of this over the next couple days. Noah^Talk 03:26, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Those references are part of Template:Highest ACE Atlantic hurricane seasons. I could change those dates to M-D-Y, but there are some articles with the Y-M-D format, so it won't match every article unless every article had the same ref format--12george1 (talk) 04:18, 3 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I won't make you hassle with it, but there is probably a way of fixing it. Noah^Talk 02:48, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Collectively, the tropical cyclones were responsible for at least 3,363 deaths – the most fatalities in a single season since 2005. Most of the season's damage was due to hurricanes Harvey, Irma, and Maria. Another notable hurricane, Nate, was the worst natural disaster in Costa Rican history. The names Harvey, Irma, Maria, and Nate were retired following the season due to the number of deaths and amount of damage they caused. I feel like this should come after the part about the number of storms. Noah^Talk 02:51, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

and an unnamed tropical depression Should say Tropical Depression Four since that is how one would refer to it. Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Link Bermuda in Arlene Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

What day did Arlene peak on? Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

April 21--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

When did Bret peak and make its first landfall? The second one's time is listed, but not the first. Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

02:00 UTC July 20--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Two fatalities from Cindy? Any details on them? Were they from the tornadoes or something else? Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Uh oh. Cindy's article says three. I've updated the numbers to reflect that Cindy caused three deaths. There was one death in Alabama when a boy was struck by a log pushed by a wave, one in Texas due to drowning, and another in Tennessee after a car skidded off a road and crashed into a pole--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Damages please make this damage throughout the article. There are three occurrences of "damages" from what I have seen. Noah^Talk 02:51, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

How far north-northeast of Cabo Gracias a Dios? Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

85 miles if rounded--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

There is now another issue in the same spot (a missing character or two I assume). Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I was looking at it on the editing mode and it took me like ten minutes to realize what you were talking about--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

After strengthening into a moderate tropical storm no such thing in this basin. Anyone familiar with the actual meaning of "moderate tropical storm" would be confused here. Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I reworded the sentence a bit and substituted "moderate tropical storm" with the landfall wind speed--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Five hours after peaking in intensity with winds of 85 mph (140 km/h) and a pressure of 981 mbar (28.97 inHg) early on the following day, Franklin made landfall in Vega de Alatorre, Veracruz. This is just awkward and vague. Early on the following day could technically be anywhere between 00 and 06. Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Should be much better now--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The cyclone rapidly weakened thereafter, and by 18:00 UTC on August 10, it dissipated as a tropical cyclone. I would avoid cyclone twice in the same sentence. Noah^Talk 02:47, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

As the storm hit, severe floods occurred in Northern Ireland, with floodwaters reaching 4.9 ft (1.5 m), and over 100 people were rescued after being trapped by floodwaters overnight. The rescue is dependent on the flooding, so this sentence should be rephrased so it isnt as wordy... I will do more tomorrow night. Tired after a long work shift. Noah^Talk 02:48, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:00, 4 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Harvey's remnants continued into the Bay of Campeche, where more conducive environmental conditions led to the re-designation of a tropical depression, around 12:00 UTC on August 23, and subsequent intensification into a tropical storm by 18:00 UTC that day. Remove the second comma and change "by 18:00 UTC that day" to six hours later. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

attaining hurricane intensity by 18:00 UTC on August 24, Category 3 strength around 18:00 UTC on August 25, and Category 4 intensity by 00:00 UTC on August 26. Since the RI progressed rather quickly, is it nessecary to have Cat 3 mentioned since it hit Cat 4 just 6 hours later? Seems to me like too many category changes are mentioned. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The hurricane made landfall in Texas between Port Aransas and Port O'Connor, around 03:00 UTC on August 26 Why is there a comma? Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The storm gradually spun down, becoming a tropical storm Spun down and becoming contradict each other. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hypenate "low pressure" (area of low pressure is an exception). Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Precipitation peaked at 60.58 in (1,538.7 mm) round the mm to 4 sigfigs Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Could you put refs 90-93 in a foot note so they don't chop up the sentence? It currently causes a readability issue since 5 total refs are in the middle of the sentence. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A westward-moving tropical wave developed into a tropical depression just west of the Cape Verde Islands early on August 30. Six hours later, the depression became Tropical Storm Irma.

Location and timing are vague... better to mention an exact time and location for the TD. Also, these can be combined. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In the years past, I've sometimes been lectured about being too specific. But I will fix this--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The current sentence structure suggests the deaths were received. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

west central and southwestern portions of the state alone Commas needed. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, a hyphen was needed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

which persisted dissipating What? Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

with the city of North Wildwood alone experienced about $2 million in damage experiencing. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A woman in Asbury Park died after being caught in a rip current. How does one die from a rip current in a park? Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That's a city name, but I could've wrote the sentence better--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

When exactly did Katia made landfall? Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Link to Hurricane Otis's section. Noah^Talk 00:25, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Numerical designation for depressions isn't needed for storms that became TSs. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

banana crops should be crop. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:08, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

intensified into Tropical Storm Nate early on October 5, just hours before it made landfall in northeastern Nicaragua. when exactly did it make landfall? The timing could be anywhere from 00-06 for formation of a TS with a landfall hours after those times. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Strong deep-layer south-southeasterly flow Needs something before "strong" to start the sentence. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

before striking Louisiana near the mouth of the Mississippi River early on October 8. How early are we talking? It has to be before 05:20 UTC, but it gives no clue as to how much time passed between the landfalls. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The extratropical low Just stated it was ET a few words ago. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Nate and large gyre Add "the". Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

precipitation peaked at 19.19 in (487 mm) need 4 sigfigs on mm. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Maritima... where is this? Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is a tiny village in Puntarenas Province near the town of Quepos--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The storm left about $225 million in the United States. The bulk of the damage occurred in coastal Alabama. Should specify "in damage". Also, you can say "with the bulk occurring in ..." Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

About 25 homes on western end Add "the". Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The low transitioned into a Tropical Storm Ophelia Cut "a". Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

and then southeastward over the few days Add "next". Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ophelia weakening early on October 15 Add "began" and possibly "rapid" as well if it fits what actually happened (I assume it was rapid given the SSTs). Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

without electricity that portion of the United Kingdom alone. Add "in". Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Tropical Storm Philippe reached its peak intensity of 40mph as recorded on Grand Cayman. Cut "tropical storm" since it was just mentioned. Where is the km/h conversion? Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

2 to 4 in (51 to 102 mm) Sigfigs... Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In Rina, abbreviate National Hurricane Center to NHC as the abbreviation was mentioned above. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

had developed sufficiently organized convection to be classified as a tropical depression. this is clunky. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Better?--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

and the other low pressure "low-pressure area" Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

watches and warnings were issues in South Carolina "issued" Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Link to windstorm season page. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'm guessing you want me to link Windstorm Perryman to the windstorm season page. I did that, but oddly enough, the windstorm season page actually doesn't even mention Windstorm Perryman--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

There is an issue with Harvey's affected areas in the table. Noah^Talk 02:38, 6 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I think I am done now. Thanks for the review, @Hurricane Noah:!--12george1 (talk) 02:52, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]