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Renault Midlum truck?
The page currently says that it was a Renault Midlum, (and that is the exact truck pictured →) but, one of the cited sources makes no mention of it and the second says it is similar to a Midlum. Any sources definite on this? 220 of Borg 04:44, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- This article isn't really a reliable source, but it says that it appears to be a Renault Midlum 220.12. Another interesting question is how Bouhlel was able to hire the van, as it is classed as a large goods vehicle under European law and an ordinary license does not permit a person to drive this type of vehicle. It has been reported that Bouhlel did not have the relevant license.[1]--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 05:22, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comment +IanMacM+ and link. I have removed the mention of that particular truck [2] as not in cited sources. 220 of Borg 06:55, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The sources are saying "similar to a Renault Midlum" rather than confirming that it is one.[3] It probably is a Renault Midlum judging by the photos, but there needs to be direct confirmation.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:20, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Agree , seems likely to be one. One of the few that even mention it say it "is" a Midlum, [4] but no really authoritive sources. Time will tell. 220 of Borg 07:39, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- UK Defence Journal, says "a Renault Midlum cargo truck was driven at speed on the Promenade des Anglais towards the crowd of people". Lloyd’s Loading List says they "understands that it was a Renault Midlum hired from French hire firm VIA Location.". The VIA Location logo can be seen seen at the door. The Washington Post says it was a "19-ton Renault cargo truck", and posted a drawing of a Renault Midlum cargo truck similar to the one used in the attack. I think it is safe to say a Renault Midlum. Erlbaeko (talk) 10:09, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comment +IanMacM+ and link. I have removed the mention of that particular truck [2] as not in cited sources. 220 of Borg 06:55, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Allahu Akbar
In this edit this sentence was removed unexplained
Witnesses said Bouhlel shouted "Allahu Akbar" during the attack, but those reports[1][2] have not been confirmed by officials.[3]
[…]
- ^ Boyle, Darren; Tonkin, Sam (14 July 2016). "Gun and truck attack leaves at least 80 dead in Nice: Men, women and kids strewn across road after lorry speeds for a MILE through holiday crowd watching fireworks, before gunman opens fire". Daily Mail. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
The truck driver, who was known to police, was said to have shouted 'Allahu Akbar' – God is great in Arabic – before being killed in a clear suicide mission. Pro-ISIS groups have been celebrating the attack, orchestrated to coincide with France's most important national holiday.
- ^ Henderson, Barney; Graham, Chris; Gurney-Read, Josie (14 July 2016). "84 killed in Nice by lorry during Bastille Day celebrations – how the attack unfolded". The Telegraph. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
2:19 am 'Driver was 31-year-old from Nice' The local newspaper, Nice-Matin, said the man driving the truck was a 31-year-old Nice resident of Tunisian origin. The truck driver was said to have shouted 'Allahu Akbar' – God is greatest – before being shot dead by police.
- ^ Sini, Rozina (15 July 2016). "Nice lorry attack sparks false rumours on social media". BBC News. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
I've added it again here. We describe what has been discussed in reliable sources. We do not make judgement if it's true or not. Just describe the claim set forth by some reliable sources. Nsaa (talk) 07:10, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- That was just a move. The (somewhat) explained deletion came next. Reliable sources say it's unconfirmed, and so did we. Doesn't seem like the sort of thing to spread, even if we tack an "unconfirmed" caveat onto it. Stick with more factual facts, I say
, but I'll let it slide. InedibleHulk (talk) 07:46, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- And now I notice it was the fucking Daily Mail. I take back letting it slide. InedibleHulk (talk) 07:49, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I concur. We should not allow our project to descend to the level of repeating unconfirmed details that are poorly sourced. --John (talk) 08:00, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The main source is The Daily Telegraph. They are known to be very good at fact checking, so we have no reason to dismiss this. The BBC just states that this has not been confirmed by the Police or other official sources, not that it's not correct. It's important that we describe the situation so people can see what has been claimed by different reliable sources. Nsaa (talk) 08:26, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- This is either the third or fourth discussion on this claim and at one point it was in the lead. As I've argued three or four times, I'm not a huge fan of the claim. I'm not sure if you can do WP:SYNTH by implication, but if you can, this is it. The implication here is fairly obviously: Islamist say Allahu Akbar. This guy said Allahu Akbar. This guy was an Islamist. This is of course notwithstanding the fact that it is perfectly appropriate to say Allahu Akbar in almost any context, including having the best burger you've ever had. TimothyJosephWood 12:14, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Oh my brother, testify! InedibleHulk (talk) 12:27, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Allahu Akbar" can have a meaning similar to "Mon dieu" or "Oh my god" in French and English. It's possible that someone in the street shouted "Allahu Akbar", but it wasn't necessarily the man in the truck; see the section below.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 12:32, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- For all we really know Pépé, the shock triggered a brief psychotic disorder, and the call came from inside the house in his brain where his government (through a series of tubes) grows associations of mass French violence with Islamic immigrant terrorism, and those were the only Arabic words he remembered when the reporter came around. I'm not saying that's what happened, of course, just not quite saying it didn't. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:22, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Allahu Akbar" can have a meaning similar to "Mon dieu" or "Oh my god" in French and English. It's possible that someone in the street shouted "Allahu Akbar", but it wasn't necessarily the man in the truck; see the section below.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 12:32, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Oh my brother, testify! InedibleHulk (talk) 12:27, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- This is either the third or fourth discussion on this claim and at one point it was in the lead. As I've argued three or four times, I'm not a huge fan of the claim. I'm not sure if you can do WP:SYNTH by implication, but if you can, this is it. The implication here is fairly obviously: Islamist say Allahu Akbar. This guy said Allahu Akbar. This guy was an Islamist. This is of course notwithstanding the fact that it is perfectly appropriate to say Allahu Akbar in almost any context, including having the best burger you've ever had. TimothyJosephWood 12:14, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The main source is The Daily Telegraph. They are known to be very good at fact checking, so we have no reason to dismiss this. The BBC just states that this has not been confirmed by the Police or other official sources, not that it's not correct. It's important that we describe the situation so people can see what has been claimed by different reliable sources. Nsaa (talk) 08:26, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I concur. We should not allow our project to descend to the level of repeating unconfirmed details that are poorly sourced. --John (talk) 08:00, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
I'm just saying, one of the sources currently for the statement calls it an outright fake. So...Seems like there's a bit of a problem in:
- the WP article saying "not yet confirmed" when the source says "Fake: Someone yelled Allahu Akbar,"
- especially when that source is explicitly talking about the other sources who were reporting rumors,
- especially, when the nature of the purported event makes it likely impossible to know 100% whether they were true
- especially, when those rumors (even if they were true) are of dubious WP:WEIGHT to the article. TimothyJosephWood 13:29, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- True...but on the other hand, Allen West gets very angry when Wikipedia doesn't blame Islamic terrorism, and when he gets angry, he gets nasty. That reminds me, the statement is also vaguely defamatory. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:40, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Fun Fact: If you reportedly say "Allahu Akbar" before cutting a few people and getting shot, they'll write a Wikipedia article about you. If you rant and rave in English before cutting a few people and getting shot, they'll write a couple sentences in Westfield Hornsby about you. InedibleHulk (talk) 06:04, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Oh wait, per the esteemed Daily Mail, he totally shouted "Allahu Akbar", too. I guess the key is doing it right after a bigger attack. InedibleHulk (talk) 06:10, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Collapsible table of casualties?
I'm not sure how wikipedia deals with tables of casualties. I'm sure if anybody tried to collapse the equivalent table on the French article, their edit would be reverted. Mathsci (talk) 14:09, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
"Seventh major attack"
I don't agree with this edit by Baron d'Holbach II. The current lede implies that all 5 attacks on 7-9 January 2015 were "major attacks", while only two had more than 1 casualty (not counting perps). I propose reverting to "third major attack", in the understanding that 'one attack' is not necessarily 'one incident', but can consist of several incidents. Alternatively, the Charlie Hebdo shooting can be singled out and linked to as one of the two prior attacks, if sources allow. Gap9551 (talk) 21:07, 15 July 2016 (UTC)
- Already done by an IP, but I agree with your rationale; let's keep it at "third". Colonel Wilhelm Klink (Complaints|Mistakes) 21:21, 15 July 2016 (UTC)
- January 2015 seems an arbitrary starting point. Was that the beginning of some sort of era? InedibleHulk (talk) 00:41, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- I see this was when France was allegedly singled out by Islamists. That's a weird thing to believe. InedibleHulk (talk) 00:47, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
See 2015 France attacks. There have been far more than "three attacks":
- Five attacks across the Île-de-France region, 7 January – 9 January
- Charlie Hebdo shooting, shooting at satirical magazine, 7 January
- Porte de Vincennes siege, attack on Kosher supermarket, 9 January
- Saint-Quentin-Fallavier attack, suspected Islamist beheading and bombings, 26 June
- 2015 Thalys train attack, 21 August
- November 2015 Paris attacks, a series of violent attacks on 13 November — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baron d'Holbach II (talk • contribs) 01:57, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- The New York Times speaks of "major attacks", not just attacks. If you can find a source calling your seven major, replace it. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:35, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
I understand that there is a reliable source behind the sentence, but the body of the article states that there is currently no evidence linking the perpetrator or attack to Islamic terrorism, and I don't think that Wikipedia should be implying this, at least not in the lede (NPOV and all). Would anyone object to moving it down into the body or even just removing it outright? ansh666 02:56, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'm fine with removal. InedibleHulk (talk) 03:07, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- There is a significant link in the sense that all three are highly publicized attacks in the same country in a short timespan. I don't think it is implied that the motives are the same. It can't hurt to mention those two attacks for context, although the Background section would also be a reasonable place. Gap9551 (talk) 23:27, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
- The text in the article may not make the terrorism link explicitly, but the sourced article does. ansh666 16:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
British English - we say courgette, you say zucchini - we say aubergine, you say eggplant
The template at the top of the article says:{{Use British English|date=July 2016}} BBC News uses the word lorry. The French term is "poids-lourd" which corresponds in British English to heavy goods vehicle. I have used both lorry and truck. American English is truck. Equally well French words create problems: e.g. procureur de Paris. Should the template be removed? Mathsci (talk) 21:32, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- I don't understand the problem or the reasoning. What I know is that policy says that, in the absence of consensus to do otherwise, and unless articles specifically pertain to a topic where a specific variety of English is more appropriate than any other, we should use the English variety the article was first written in (at the time when the use a variety first became apparent), and that one variety should be used consistently, so for instance American and British English should not be mixed within the same article. LjL (talk) 21:53, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- Please read Template:Use British English. Then you might understand a little better. Mathsci (talk) 22:12, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- I know the template well enough. Have you read WP:ENGVAR on your turn? It's very simple, really: find the first version of the article where it was clear whether British or American English (or some other English variant) was being used, and use that variety and no other variety, and include, if desired, the relevant template (Template:Use British English like now, or Template:Use American English, or other ones). Quite linear. What the terms are in French has absolutely no relevance, and neither does which variety's terms are used in the sources, unless you're quoting them directly (inside quotation marks). LjL (talk) 22:33, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- I changed one "lorry" (where the guns were found) because it was the only one in the article. Template or no, "truck" was overwhelmingly the de facto standard. InedibleHulk (talk) 23:14, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- I think the template was added to encourage people to use Ye Olde British Englishe, not to describe the current state of the article. 2601:644:1:3E52:D52F:4228:256C:1B5F (talk) 00:43, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Fortunately wikipedia uses mobile phone; cell phone is a redirect. [The French term is (téléphone) portable.] There were many cases of lorry, almost all of them in the timeline box. InedibleHulk must have been asleep.Mathsci (talk) 00:54, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Maybe. When I looked, it was the only one, aside from headlines in References. I recently added a "radicalized", but it was in a quote, so I was compelled. Do we need to look for British translations of French quotes? I hope not. InedibleHulk (talk) 00:57, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Fortunately wikipedia uses mobile phone; cell phone is a redirect. [The French term is (téléphone) portable.] There were many cases of lorry, almost all of them in the timeline box. InedibleHulk must have been asleep.Mathsci (talk) 00:54, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I think the template was added to encourage people to use Ye Olde British Englishe, not to describe the current state of the article. 2601:644:1:3E52:D52F:4228:256C:1B5F (talk) 00:43, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
British English is being used in the spelling of "neighbour", The more serious problem however is with Arabic. French media, French wikipedia, BBC News and reputable media now hyphenate he surname of the attacker, Mohamed Lahouaiej-Bouhlel. On BBC News bulletins they were already using the surname yesterday. I have modified the article. The fork cannot be moved but that doesn't matter because Mohamed Lahouaiej-Bouhlel is a redirect. Mathsci (talk) 08:08, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- For motorized vehicle, you can see European driving licence as European English probably avoid your britishamerican orthography polemics. Different class of motorized vehicle, are more or less described there. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.199.96.122 (talk) 10:50, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Since France has - in the past - had a closer relationship with Britain as part of the EU, and more English nationals are on scene, the use of British English seems appropriate. It had to be someone's. That said, I don't view this as an absolute cause, because to my way of thinking there is just one language, English, and it all the regional variations are just a matter of taste and vocabulary. I mean, this just tells me I should learn wikt:courgette is a synonym for zucchini, just as if some Valley Girls had popularized the term in the media yesterday, not try to reject it as some other country's language. Wnt (talk) 12:04, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- UK English is preferred ONLY for consistency, we should still use 'universally understood' when poss. In this case 'truck' is more universal (linked to HGV as it is). HOWEVER do we need to slavishly follow spellings of translations from French. Sure, NYT is going to translate 'ized', while the BBC is going to used 'ised', but since neither is the original French quote, doesn't consistency trump verbatim? Obviously if a US source says something we quote verbatim, but why for translation? Pincrete (talk) 17:04, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Wrong biographical information
- Article states he was born in Nice. This is incorrect.
- According to the NYT-Mohamed Lahouaiej Bouhlel, 31, a delivery-truck driver who was born on Jan. 3, 1985, and raised in Msaken, a town in northeastern Tunisia, and who moved to France around 2005.www.nytimes.com/2016/07/16/world/europe/attack-nice-bastille-day.html
- Source 28 (a Guardian article) doesn't say when he moved to France, but is stated for saying he moved to France in 2005. 129.15.64.220 (talk) 19:15, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- It's stated that the perpetrator was divorced, according to a BBC article (source 14). However, source 28 (a Guardian article) states he isn't divorced. 129.15.64.220 (talk) 19:15, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
The number of injured should not decrease
I just changed 18 critically injured in the infobox to 52. This is about an event in time, which will have always critically injured 52. Victims recover, but they still were injured. That's the important thing. If we treat it as a developing story rather than an incident, not only are we pretending to be a newspaper, but there will be zero people in critical condition soon enough and then we'll have to say nobody was seriously hurt. Keeping a running tally also makes counting however many of the minorly-injured recovered over the next day or two tricky. I'd wager it's over a hundred (physically, anyway). InedibleHulk (talk) 15:03, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Mathsci: I'll assume it only looks like you reverted for no reason. Care to fill in the blank? InedibleHulk (talk) 15:43, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Your ping did not work. The sourcing in the infobox works fine, but not in the body of the article. I don't know who wrote the text on casualties. I improved the source in the body of the article and rewrote the text as follows: "The figure of 303 indicates the total number of people admitted into hospital with injuries after the attack; some of these admissions did not occur immediately." The discrepancy between the initial number of 202 and the final number of 303 is because some patients were not admitted immediately. The BBC checked their information carefully so no extra scrutiny is required.
- I think the number 303 is the only number that should appear in the injured portion of the infobox, The number of critically injured should not be in the infobox in any form. I don't think the article can record the number that remain critically ill. It is something that is too hard to keep track of. Obviously if there are further deaths as a result of injury then this has to be recorded. The victims section should just have the total number placed in intensive care (i.e. classified by the hospitals as critically injured), as it does now. Mathsci (talk) 17:11, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with this and with the point made by InedibleHulk. The infobox should just have the total number of people that got injured (at some point in time) and survived, and the prose can mention the initial number of critically injured. Gap9551 (talk) 19:43, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Plenty of room in the body for both the initial casualties, and a reliably sourced "as of" update. I still lean more toward noting total and critical injuries contemporary with the event in the infobox, but just having the total isn't terrible, either. My main problem was with one gradually decreasing toward zero, and the minor ones never moving, despite healing faster. Made no sense. InedibleHulk (talk) 01:44, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with this and with the point made by InedibleHulk. The infobox should just have the total number of people that got injured (at some point in time) and survived, and the prose can mention the initial number of critically injured. Gap9551 (talk) 19:43, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I think the number 303 is the only number that should appear in the injured portion of the infobox, The number of critically injured should not be in the infobox in any form. I don't think the article can record the number that remain critically ill. It is something that is too hard to keep track of. Obviously if there are further deaths as a result of injury then this has to be recorded. The victims section should just have the total number placed in intensive care (i.e. classified by the hospitals as critically injured), as it does now. Mathsci (talk) 17:11, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
I also don't understand what "As many of those injured had not immediately reached out for help, many sources reported the total number of injured as 303" is supposed to mean. A little help? InedibleHulk (talk) 15:10, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
:Agree that the number of critically injured is a constant, however would a 'remain critical at date' satisfy the changing figure?Pincrete (talk) 17:26, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Estranged wife released ?
At present we say "Lahouaiej-Bouhlel's estranged wife and a man were arrested", I'm pretty certain she was released without charge. I cannot fix this myself (RL calls), but we should fix this. Pincrete (talk) 10:02, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- You are correct. I think the BBC write that she was released after a day. BTW thanks for cleaning up the sentence on Allahu akbar. Note also that editors are trying to add personal details about his promiscuous lifestyle without any mention of his wife. Many of those editors are active on the fork article, where the lede describes the perpetrator as a Tunisian terrorist living in France. Mathsci (talk) 10:22, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Two days. I fixed it. InedibleHulk (talk) 10:25, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Perpetrator's sex life
Ever since salacious material on the sex life of the attacker started appearing in the fork article, I have been wondering when precisely editors would start trying to introduce that material here. Already a reference has been added about the perpetrator's 73 year old lover by Gucci, although no material in the article relied on that content or was even related to that content. If editors want to add those references or that content to the article, could they please explain why here. Personally I think the word bisexual covers everything. Extra content should not read like an extract from the life and times of the Marquis de Sade (who lived not far away in Lacoste, in the chateau now owned by Pierre Cardin). Three or four extra words would suffice. We should probably follow the BBC or Le Monde on this. BBC News has been a principal source so far. Mathsci (talk) 01:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- You have been asked twice, and pinged once to comment on discussion there, and you have so far declined. You have been reverted twice on this article by myself (and more by others), and encouraged to engage in discussion. I think the take away is that starting a new thread and moving on, does not establish consensus. Please review WP:CON and try to reach it with regard to the contested edits. TimothyJosephWood 01:16, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- (ec) I'm sorry, this page is not for discussions like that. On the other hand, since you mention consensus, you did not react at all to the material I added here on the interviews conducted by Nice-Matin. You reverted two brand new sentences that I had written and in the edits accused me of edit-warring. Those sentences are now essentially back in the article possibly because I had taken some trouble in explaining what actually was in the sources. That is how consensus works. I'm not sure why you the Nice-Matin source without knowing what it was about. Did you not feel slightly uncomfortable labelling the testimony of residents of Nice who witnessed these atrocities as "fake"? Or do you just not care? Mathsci (talk) 02:02, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- You can remove reference to his bisexuality if it rubs you the wrong way—not a biggie for me at all. The reason it was added was a) reliable source, citing evidence b) relevant to the promiscuity angle. I didn't write anything about his bisexuality in the body cause it's not that important. A ploy for introducing his male lover? Just don't give me any ideas, please.Guccisamsclub (talk) 01:34, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- It's not what I said. I wrote bisexual is the only word I would use. Is that so hard to understand? Mathsci (talk) 02:02, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Maybe you should add it to the wiki manual of style. But since the source I added made no mention of homosexuality, what are you even objecting to? The fact that somebody might put the word "homosexual" into the article in the future? I am as outraged about this grave problem as you are... truly outraged, befuddled, offended and shocked!Guccisamsclub (talk) 02:15, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- The French have already solved the problem using a phrase to describe his promiscuity that links to bisexuality. That is all they did and it was a very elegant solution. They used Le Parisian which is fine. Are you writing in this outlandish way so that people won't take you seriously, or is there another reason? Mathsci (talk) 04:45, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Both this article and the article on the perpetrator should mention his bisexual lifestyle. Jim Michael (talk) 09:42, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- This was a bit of a fucked-up way to say it, though. InedibleHulk (talk) 10:14, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Both this article and the article on the perpetrator should mention his bisexual lifestyle. Jim Michael (talk) 09:42, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- The French have already solved the problem using a phrase to describe his promiscuity that links to bisexuality. That is all they did and it was a very elegant solution. They used Le Parisian which is fine. Are you writing in this outlandish way so that people won't take you seriously, or is there another reason? Mathsci (talk) 04:45, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Maybe you should add it to the wiki manual of style. But since the source I added made no mention of homosexuality, what are you even objecting to? The fact that somebody might put the word "homosexual" into the article in the future? I am as outraged about this grave problem as you are... truly outraged, befuddled, offended and shocked!Guccisamsclub (talk) 02:15, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- It's not what I said. I wrote bisexual is the only word I would use. Is that so hard to understand? Mathsci (talk) 02:02, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- You can remove reference to his bisexuality if it rubs you the wrong way—not a biggie for me at all. The reason it was added was a) reliable source, citing evidence b) relevant to the promiscuity angle. I didn't write anything about his bisexuality in the body cause it's not that important. A ploy for introducing his male lover? Just don't give me any ideas, please.Guccisamsclub (talk) 01:34, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Not in the way you just tried. The French article does this quite well. They do it in this way:
He was involved in numerous promiscuous relations with both men and women.
But if this is to be mentioned, his estranged wife should be mentioned and the reports that he beat her. There are many places where this has been reported. French wikipedia uses Le Parisien as their reference. Since the information was supplied by police investigators after examining his mobile phone and home computer, there is no need to mention a specific newspaper. Nor to write it out of context in a sensationalist way as you just did. A brief summary of what happened to his marriage is necessary, before anything like this is added. The French wikipedia article does this very well. It is concise, factual and properly sourced. Possible affiliations and research about terrorism done on his home computer are a separate issue covered in other parts of the article. Putting in the same sentence makes no sense: it looks like a Daily Mail headline. Thanks, Mathsci (talk) 10:17, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Info about his marriage should be there as well - it's all relevant. Jim Michael (talk) 11:40, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- All done now. I adapted the French wikipedia approach. They describe in great detail the old abattoirs quarter of Nice off the route de Turin where he was lodged after his wife threw him out of their conjugal lodging. (I've done a virtual journey down the back streets there on google maps.) That was changed to "After separating from his wife". The BBC also has a comprehensive page on L-B which I summarised in a general way without explicitly mentioning beheadings. There does not seem to be any need for further content on the topic of this section, unless there is some unforeseen new development. Mathsci (talk) 12:19, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Is there something I'm not seeing about how "sexual relations with both men and women" is better than "bisexual relationships"? InedibleHulk (talk) 12:46, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- There is very little difference, and that phrase can be changed if you want to. Your method might be better as there is less blue, so it's less obtrusive. Le Parisien is a much better source than the other two. It was misrepresented as I explain below. So what if it's in French. Mathsci (talk) 12:52, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Actually the phrasing I adopted—a direct translation form the French wikipedia—indicates that these were mostly not relationships but casual sexual encounters. Perhaps there is another way of saying it, but relationship is not quite right. Clinton had sexual relations with Monica Lewinsky, but not a relationship. Mathsci (talk) 13:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Bisexual relations? Bisexual encounters? Whatever you call sex type things, with a "bi" tacked on? InedibleHulk (talk) 13:10, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I went with the Clinton one. If that's no good, change it, but try for something short, if you can. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:15, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Pretty sure the grammatically correct term is "bisect", as in "he bisected lots of men and women". TimothyJosephWood 13:19, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I read about one guy. Were there others? InedibleHulk (talk) 13:28, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- ...I...um...er...uh... TimothyJosephWood 13:47, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I read about one guy. Were there others? InedibleHulk (talk) 13:28, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Pretty sure the grammatically correct term is "bisect", as in "he bisected lots of men and women". TimothyJosephWood 13:19, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Actually the phrasing I adopted—a direct translation form the French wikipedia—indicates that these were mostly not relationships but casual sexual encounters. Perhaps there is another way of saying it, but relationship is not quite right. Clinton had sexual relations with Monica Lewinsky, but not a relationship. Mathsci (talk) 13:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- There is very little difference, and that phrase can be changed if you want to. Your method might be better as there is less blue, so it's less obtrusive. Le Parisien is a much better source than the other two. It was misrepresented as I explain below. So what if it's in French. Mathsci (talk) 12:52, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Is there something I'm not seeing about how "sexual relations with both men and women" is better than "bisexual relationships"? InedibleHulk (talk) 12:46, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- All done now. I adapted the French wikipedia approach. They describe in great detail the old abattoirs quarter of Nice off the route de Turin where he was lodged after his wife threw him out of their conjugal lodging. (I've done a virtual journey down the back streets there on google maps.) That was changed to "After separating from his wife". The BBC also has a comprehensive page on L-B which I summarised in a general way without explicitly mentioning beheadings. There does not seem to be any need for further content on the topic of this section, unless there is some unforeseen new development. Mathsci (talk) 12:19, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Pedantic detail, but you can't have 'bisexual relations/encounters' (unless you are part of a three-some). What you have is 'sexual relations/encounters with both men and women.'Mathsci's original translation was probably correct. Pincrete (talk) 13:45, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not really 100% comfortable with references bisexuality. At least the unofficial standard on this list, that I've (regrettably) been involved in, the issue is treated more as a self-identification thing, i.e., gay sex doesn't make you a member of a gay sect; self-identifying as gay does. TimothyJosephWood 14:05, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- We can say that he enjoyed a very active bisexual life, without saying anything about how he may have self-identified. Jim Michael (talk) 14:12, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- If we avoided the word 'bisexual' and didn't use the link ie sexual relations with both men and women, is everybody happy?Pincrete (talk) 14:18, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I am very happy with your solution. Even if fr.wikipedia.org used it, I still found the blue link obtrusive as I said above. It was like a subliminal message that dared not speak its name. We have to paraphrase in a neutral tone what the source said. Mathsci (talk) 14:46, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- If we avoided the word 'bisexual' and didn't use the link ie sexual relations with both men and women, is everybody happy?Pincrete (talk) 14:18, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- We can say that he enjoyed a very active bisexual life, without saying anything about how he may have self-identified. Jim Michael (talk) 14:12, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Sexual relations" is pretty robotic/Spock-like in tone. The sky source (removed because apparently this is a pissing contest), said "lovers". I'm more in favor of just saying "relationships with" and achieve accuracy in vagueness. Romantic, sexual, platonic, just-didn't-work-out, whatever, it's covered. TimothyJosephWood 14:29, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- We should go with Mathsci's translation, which is more like 'relations' or 'encounters', we don't need to romanticise the source. Pincrete (talk) 14:45, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Ships are a bit romantic. InedibleHulk (talk) 15:11, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- We should go with Mathsci's translation, which is more like 'relations' or 'encounters', we don't need to romanticise the source. Pincrete (talk) 14:45, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Sexual relations" is pretty robotic/Spock-like in tone. The sky source (removed because apparently this is a pissing contest), said "lovers". I'm more in favor of just saying "relationships with" and achieve accuracy in vagueness. Romantic, sexual, platonic, just-didn't-work-out, whatever, it's covered. TimothyJosephWood 14:29, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Gross misrepresentation of source
In an edit summary Timothyjosephwood stated falsely that the article in Le Parisien[5] made no mention of L-B's sexual realations. That is a false claim. Being charitable, I will just assume that User:Timothyjosephwood cannot read French. The article is used on the French wikipedia, is in a good newspaper and states the following. "Les noms de nombreuses conquêtes féminines, mais aussi masculines, ont été identifiés dans son téléphone portable. La plupart d'entre elles ont été auditionnées." If Timothyjosephwood has no command of French, he should not be edit warring in this way. I will report him at WP:ANI if he continues in this way. Mathsci (talk) 12:32, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I hope Timothyjosephwood will explain why he grossly misrepresented this source and used two poor quality sources instead. Mathsci (talk) 12:41, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- First of all, the references all say the same thing, and are all used to support the some content...so...who really cares? Second, it appears I was looking at the wrong source.
- Third, (although this was not my original intention) this is the English Wikipedia, and we should probably prefer English sources, so that content can be verified by readers, who are presumably here because they speak English.
- Finally, if you think I am edit warring, WP:AN3 is the appropriate board to post on, not WP:ANI. TimothyJosephWood 13:11, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Sources do not need to be in a particular language. If information is duplicated, use the English language source. But French sources are acceptable. EvergreenFir (talk) 14:58, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Here's the beginning of yesterday's AFP report in Libération.
- «Dragueur» un peu lourd à la vie sexuelle «débridée», amateur de bière et de gonflette aux accès de violence fréquents, Mohamed Lahouaiej Bouhlel avait apparemment basculé au cours des derniers mois, et plus encore des dernières semaines, montrant depuis un intérêt «certain» pour le jihadisme.Les témoignages recueillis par les enquêteurs depuis l’attentat commis jeudi soir sur la Promenade des Anglais permettent de brosser le portrait d’un jeune homme «très éloigné des considérations religieuses, ne pratiquant pas la religion musulmane, mangeant du porc, buvant de l’alcool, consommant de la drogue et ayant une vie sexuelle débridée», a détaillé lundi le procureur de la République de Paris, François Molins. Un homme de 74 ans entendu par les enquêteurs est même présenté par certains comme un des amants du jeune homme. La caractère prémédité de son attaque ne fait aucun doute, et plusieurs éléments viennent accréditer l’hypothèse d’une radicalisation rapide, survenue en quelques semaines ou quelques mois, a poursuivi le magistrat. Le 1er janvier, il prend en photo un article de Nice-Matin titré «Il fonce volontairement sur la terrasse d’un restaurant». Depuis huit jours, il s’était laissé pousser la barbe, l’expliquant par une «signification religieuse» et évoquant l’Etat islamique. De nombreux documents «en lien avec l’islam radical» ont aussi été retrouvés sur son ordinateur.
- It's written in a cautious style and makes it clear that it is the Procureur de la République à Paris, François Molins, who is briefing the press on progress in the investigation. Molins refers to Lahouaiej-Bouhlel's "unbridled sex life"; the 74 year old man helping the police with their enquiries, even referred to by some as one of the young man's lovers; how in January he photographed an article in Nice-Matin about a car smashing into a local restaurant; and his eight days growing a beard for religious reasons.
- When these direct quotes come from Molins, they are very useful. Mathsci (talk) 16:43, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Regardless, per WP:NONENG, if we have an English source that covers the claim just as well, we should use it instead of a non-English source. TimothyJosephWood 17:08, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- No, not at all. The article above attributes statements previously stated to be opinions of neighbours to the French Prosecutor, the head of investigations. If I wanted I could use that to rewrite part of the article. I could change "promiscuity" to "unbridled sex life" or some equivalent. In the fork article you added salacious content about a 73 year old lover. You wrote, "Law enforcement examination of his phone revealed what Sky News described as a 'string' of relationships with both men and women, including a 73 year old male characterized by French media as his 'principal lover'". Here Molins described how a 74 year old is helping police with their enquires, (hence relevant) whom some claim to be the perpetrator's lover (non-committal). What a difference. The content about the interview with Nice-Matin could only be written using French sources. Mathsci (talk) 17:49, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Speaking from experience of 'Thalys' attack, the best sources were often French and I can vouch for the fact that Mathsci, has a good eye for the nuances of French (officialese/colloquial etc), and he errs on the right side of cautious when translating.Pincrete (talk) 17:59, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- The source is currently cited once, for a single sentence, for which there are ample English sources that just as well support the content. What you could hypothetically write with the French article is irrelevant. Guidance in WP:V is clear: use an English source when one is available. TimothyJosephWood 18:04, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I would also suggest that discussion about Mohamed Lahouaiej-Bouhlel take place on the relevant talk, where I have both invited you on your talk, and pinged you to in discussion, after your reversion was undone by another editor. TimothyJosephWood 18:07, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- No, not at all. The article above attributes statements previously stated to be opinions of neighbours to the French Prosecutor, the head of investigations. If I wanted I could use that to rewrite part of the article. I could change "promiscuity" to "unbridled sex life" or some equivalent. In the fork article you added salacious content about a 73 year old lover. You wrote, "Law enforcement examination of his phone revealed what Sky News described as a 'string' of relationships with both men and women, including a 73 year old male characterized by French media as his 'principal lover'". Here Molins described how a 74 year old is helping police with their enquires, (hence relevant) whom some claim to be the perpetrator's lover (non-committal). What a difference. The content about the interview with Nice-Matin could only be written using French sources. Mathsci (talk) 17:49, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- Regardless, per WP:NONENG, if we have an English source that covers the claim just as well, we should use it instead of a non-English source. TimothyJosephWood 17:08, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- When these direct quotes come from Molins, they are very useful. Mathsci (talk) 16:43, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- No. It's no concern of editors here. It's a POV-fork up for deletion. Its content is created by copy-pasting content from here without attribution. Or it's sensationalist, like the stuff you're concocting at present. The POV is clear from the outset, since L-B is described in the lede as a Tunisian terrorist. On the other hand the Liberation article is a newspaper article with sentences and paragraphs. It is what actually appears in the paper. You are using primitive web articles (Indian Times) possibly written for those with a short attention span. You're worried at the moment about adding material about the 73 year old. Perhaps he's really 74. You identify him as a lover, but that is not how the French Prosecutor describes him. Mathsci (talk) 18:42, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- What's PoV about describing him as a Tunisian terrorist? That's what he was. Jim Michael (talk) 19:03, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Alright, well, it seems like this conversation has about a 0% chance of going anywhere productive, and seems at this point to be only tangentially related to article improvement. I'm going to add the English sources back into the article, because that's what WP:V tells us to do, and there's been no policy driven argument to the contrary. If Mathsi wants to edit war over including more sources I'd say that's a pretty clear indication this is a personal issue and not about improving the article.
There is no obvious WP:OVERCITE issue in including three sources instead of one. I don't particularly care whether the French cite stays in or not. I don't feel particularly strongly about the whole issue or this conversation.
I'm not debating another article or it's AfD here. If you want to discuss them, go to the relevant talks for the benefit of editors there. Anyone here who is interested can follow, as many already have. If you want your personally preferred source used to the exclusion of others, you need to find a policy that says we should do that. I haven't found one. TimothyJosephWood 19:09, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- There is a policy quoted above, French sources are perfectly good. You have to compare like with like, when equally complete and authoritative sources are available, we use the Eng, but we don't use a poor, short UK source in preference to a more thorough French one. I don't have any feelings about additional Eng refs, but I do have feelings about using the most authoritative source for text. To not do so is perverse. Pincrete (talk) 19:36, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I have no problems with keeping the French source in. As I pointed out when this started, I was looking at the wrong source when I made the edit. This conversation could have gone: "Hey, why'd you do that?"..."My bad"..."Let's compromise"..."Sure" TimothyJosephWood 19:39, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- The issue being though which text we give credence to, and to do that (even though it is slower), we have to weight the relative authority EVEN when it is French … … btw I'm lost as to what the issue is with the 73 year old male, personal feeling is that it's irrelevant and too close to identifiable BLP. Pincrete (talk) 19:48, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I argued fairly strongly against it initially. At this point I figure that if he was dating a woman his own age who was helping police in the investigation, it would probably be relevant. His age and gender are incidental. TimothyJosephWood 19:56, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- If the context is any help he is giving to enquiries, I agree, if it's just to add detail to the numerous sexual encounters, I think it's tawdry frankly. Pincrete (talk) 20:14, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I argued the same thing. But I think that may be a reflection of whether I personally think it's "normal" relationship, which is ultimately irrelevant. Maybe the distinction would be more clearly made if they were separated in the article. We may be making an implication by association. TimothyJosephWood 20:21, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- If the context is any help he is giving to enquiries, I agree, if it's just to add detail to the numerous sexual encounters, I think it's tawdry frankly. Pincrete (talk) 20:14, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I argued fairly strongly against it initially. At this point I figure that if he was dating a woman his own age who was helping police in the investigation, it would probably be relevant. His age and gender are incidental. TimothyJosephWood 19:56, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- The issue being though which text we give credence to, and to do that (even though it is slower), we have to weight the relative authority EVEN when it is French … … btw I'm lost as to what the issue is with the 73 year old male, personal feeling is that it's irrelevant and too close to identifiable BLP. Pincrete (talk) 19:48, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I have no problems with keeping the French source in. As I pointed out when this started, I was looking at the wrong source when I made the edit. This conversation could have gone: "Hey, why'd you do that?"..."My bad"..."Let's compromise"..."Sure" TimothyJosephWood 19:39, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Daily Mail as source
Why is Daily Mail removed as a source here? There is no WP:BLP Policy forbidding us to use Daily Mail as an source for their News coverage. Nsaa (talk) 07:22, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The Daily Mail is not an ideal source. However, it is entirely predictable that John will remove material cited to it without bothering to check first to see if more reliable sources are available, in line with what WP:BLPSOURCES actually says.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:26, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Removed again. Where in WP:BLPSOURCES is it stated that Daily Mail cannot be used as a secondary source for a claim? Nsaa (talk) 07:28, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- John doesn't like the Daily Mail and will remove it every time he comes across it, saying "no tabloids on BLPs, please" or similar. I wouldn't use the Daily Mail if a better source was available, because this is what WP:BLPSOURCES actually says.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:32, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- If the Daily Mail is the best thing you can find for a claim, that means the claim is almost certainly bullshit. InedibleHulk (talk) 07:50, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, this is why WP:BLPSOURCES was introduced, it relates to something that happened at Philip Mould and Daily Mail coverage. As for the claim that the truck driver shouted " Allahu Akbar", it is just a claim and needs to be treated with some caution. Better out than in for this one.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:55, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- MythBusters could probably find if it's possible to hear anything clearly from a truck that size roaring through a crowd of screaming people with the (bulletproofed?) windows up, and if so, how close you'd have to be. InedibleHulk (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The main source for this is NOT Daily Mail, it's the very reliable The Daily Telegraph. Please don't mix up stuff. Here we discuss Daily Mail, not the terrorist. Nsaa (talk) 08:29, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The Telegraph just said the driver was said to have shouted it. Not that an eyewitness said it. Maybe they mean the Daily Mail said it. InedibleHulk (talk) 09:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Heavy says the Telegraph says Nice-Matin said the driver was said to have said it, but neither link there leads to anything that says it. InedibleHulk (talk) 09:23, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The main source for this is NOT Daily Mail, it's the very reliable The Daily Telegraph. Please don't mix up stuff. Here we discuss Daily Mail, not the terrorist. Nsaa (talk) 08:29, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- MythBusters could probably find if it's possible to hear anything clearly from a truck that size roaring through a crowd of screaming people with the (bulletproofed?) windows up, and if so, how close you'd have to be. InedibleHulk (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, this is why WP:BLPSOURCES was introduced, it relates to something that happened at Philip Mould and Daily Mail coverage. As for the claim that the truck driver shouted " Allahu Akbar", it is just a claim and needs to be treated with some caution. Better out than in for this one.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:55, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- If the Daily Mail is the best thing you can find for a claim, that means the claim is almost certainly bullshit. InedibleHulk (talk) 07:50, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- RT says BFM cited a report which said a witness said he said it, but if it ever happened on TV, it's not in a site search for BFMTV.com. At least in nothing pertaining to this. InedibleHulk (talk) 09:29, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Mathsci: And now you say Nice-Matin said it, too. Did you read that report, or just reports of the report? InedibleHulk (talk) 09:39, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- It looks like hearsay and churnalism are involved on the "Allahu Akbar" claim, and it is best left out unless the sourcing is firmer.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 09:41, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'll agree, but only pending non-confirmation from Mathsci. InedibleHulk (talk) 09:45, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Non-confirmation? Here is the link to Nice Matin, [6]. Note that somebody archived it. Mathsci (talk) 10:07, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- That's a bit more like it. InedibleHulk (talk) 11:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I will take that as an apology. Mathsci (talk) 13:44, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- If you think I expected you to fail, that's not what I meant. If it was, I wouldn't have bothered pinging you or waiting to find out. InedibleHulk (talk) 14:02, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Why write "pending non-confirmation" in that case? Mathsci (talk) 14:23, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Because I was only going to agree it was best left out if you came back with nothing. Sorry for the confusion, at least. InedibleHulk (talk) 14:40, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Why write "pending non-confirmation" in that case? Mathsci (talk) 14:23, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- If you think I expected you to fail, that's not what I meant. If it was, I wouldn't have bothered pinging you or waiting to find out. InedibleHulk (talk) 14:02, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I will take that as an apology. Mathsci (talk) 13:44, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- That's a bit more like it. InedibleHulk (talk) 11:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Now added to the article. Mathsci (talk) 10:52, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- So, Pépé, a witness, said he heard “Allahu akbar” three times from his balcony when the truck hit someone on the street below. He doesn’t say it was the driver that shouted it. Erlbaeko (talk) 11:01, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, just as likely to be a Muslim victim who said a final prayer before he went to meet his maker. WWGB (talk) 11:05, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Or just one terrified, like the "oh, mon Dieu" and "good Lord above" crowd. It's not always about bloody death. InedibleHulk (talk) 11:53, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I have to agree with InedibleHulk that if a person was driving a truck down a street at 50 MPH, it is unlikely that anyone would be able to make out what was being said in the cab, particularly if the windows were closed. Anyway, that is just my two cents of original research.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 11:09, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, just as likely to be a Muslim victim who said a final prayer before he went to meet his maker. WWGB (talk) 11:05, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- So, Pépé, a witness, said he heard “Allahu akbar” three times from his balcony when the truck hit someone on the street below. He doesn’t say it was the driver that shouted it. Erlbaeko (talk) 11:01, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Non-confirmation? Here is the link to Nice Matin, [6]. Note that somebody archived it. Mathsci (talk) 10:07, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'll agree, but only pending non-confirmation from Mathsci. InedibleHulk (talk) 09:45, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- It looks like hearsay and churnalism are involved on the "Allahu Akbar" claim, and it is best left out unless the sourcing is firmer.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 09:41, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Mathsci: And now you say Nice-Matin said it, too. Did you read that report, or just reports of the report? InedibleHulk (talk) 09:39, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
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} @Nsaa and Ianmacm: Apart from the issue of this edit, it looks like User:John really is on a specific crusade against the Daily Mail: here, Mohamed Lahouaiej-Bouhlel, something at Amber Rudd about the Daily Mail, Chris Grayling, David Davis, Amber Rudd, Theresa May[7][8], Tony Blair, Andrea Leadsom, Appropriate Adult (still using the "no tabloids on BLPs" line), and [https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=2016_Atat%C3%BCrk_Airport_attack&diff=prev&oldid=727744025 2016 Ataturk Airport attack. And that's only in the span from July 1 to July 18! Now the excuse is that he is against tabloids, but it is curious that Daily Mail, one of the UK's largest newspapers, is described in tabloid journalism as a "middle market" tabloid, as opposed to red tops. According to the Daily Mail article, it has received various awards on journalism. So it seems like he is single-handedly trying to create a policy against using this newspaper, which I don't think is really well rooted. From what I've seen, Daily Mail tends to pick up everything it can, which occasionally means it has wrong facts but most of the time makes it an invaluable resource for digging deeper into an issue. My response would never be to delete it, but to find extra sources for contentious claims made from it. So I think that some serious discussion is needed of his deletionist approach here. Wnt (talk) 14:24, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
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Looking into the claim itself, this French source has an interview with a witness who says the man yelled "Allahu akbar" three times. (At least, that's how they summarize the interview; I can use Google translate on the text but not on the interview itself) The BBC describes the claim as "fake" solely because "no official source" had said it, which is perhaps illustrative of their world-view but not really very persuasive to my way of thinking. Heavy.com reviews many of the other reports of this. I would say it is not absolutely sure but I certainly would not dismiss the idea out of hand based on OR. I mean, can you really keep your speed at 50 miles an hour all the time that you're mowing down a crowd of people? Wnt (talk) 14:35, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I think WP:DUE is the way to go on this one. Why does it matter even if it were true, other than to support the WP:POV that he was an Islamist? What is the prevalence of this information among reliable source? Are there articles specifically about him saying this and exploring its implications, or is this a trivial fact, given passing mention, as unconfirmed gossip, in few sources? It seems a lot like it might be the latter. TimothyJosephWood 14:51, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- This guy gets it. InedibleHulk (talk) 15:05, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- (ec) Pretty much. The ones I cited above ([9][10]) were specifically about the phrase; this hinges in large part on it; this discusses it, and many others mention it. It is emblematic of some fundamental questions about the attack. Was this a "sleeper agent" enjoying his wine, women, and pork believing all his sins would be forgiven when he died in the attack, as has been said of other Islamic terrorists? Was this someone who wanted to suddenly make 'amends' for an irreverent lifestyle, as has been claimed about the Orlando shooter? Or is this a bigoted public trying to press an anti-Muslim narrative onto a killing by someone who just happened to be nominally a member of the religion? Well, it's mostly guesswork so far, but the question is important and answerable, and pieces of data like this add up to a potential answer. Wnt (talk) 15:07, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I've not found anything on BBC News which discusses this. So Wnt please give your BBC source.
- (ec) Pretty much. The ones I cited above ([9][10]) were specifically about the phrase; this hinges in large part on it; this discusses it, and many others mention it. It is emblematic of some fundamental questions about the attack. Was this a "sleeper agent" enjoying his wine, women, and pork believing all his sins would be forgiven when he died in the attack, as has been said of other Islamic terrorists? Was this someone who wanted to suddenly make 'amends' for an irreverent lifestyle, as has been claimed about the Orlando shooter? Or is this a bigoted public trying to press an anti-Muslim narrative onto a killing by someone who just happened to be nominally a member of the religion? Well, it's mostly guesswork so far, but the question is important and answerable, and pieces of data like this add up to a potential answer. Wnt (talk) 15:07, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The latest news bulletin on BBC News is about statements just released by the Procureur de Paris on the attacker's recent radicalisation. It mentioned analysis of his home computer. All that is useful and might already be available in French. Mathsci (talk) 15:22, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Hmm...well...
- The Heavy piece isn't super-duper IMO. It's a mostly entertainment site reporting a reported report. I don't exactly see a 3AM tweet from The Sun as a high-quality reliable source. And the Telegraph quote is very tentative and rumor-like. Overall, the piece is worse than a media echochamber; it's a meta analysis of the media echo chamber
- The 9News piece is entirely about how trivial details/hearsay like this and preexisting biases have mucked things up.
- The piece from The Telegraph is at best an extended opinion piece and at worst a glorified blog.
- The original, (our good friend Pepe) machine translated, is "heard several times". There's nothing in the original French as far as I can tell that could be construed as shout, which is what you get when you go from the original, to the telegraph op ed, to heavy, to the Wikipedia article. All in all it seems to be the report of poor Pepe, ground through the media machine until it makes a stunning headline.
- Even if it wasn't a single quote dragged through an echo chamber, the pieces (besides the original) are not about the quote; they are about either speculation as to whether or not he was an Islamist, or criticism about exactly that type of speculation. That's the only reason the quote is included in the pieces, and that's the only reason it is included in the WP article: to imply that he was an Islamist.
- Wikipedia is not a detective agency. It is, as you phrase it, "guesswork", or as I would phrase it, "rumors and speculation". If sources say he is Islamist then so should WP. If sources disagree, then so should WP. If sources of dubious seriousness pick up on a minute detail to push a larger narrative that he was Islamist precisely because we don't know, then no, WP should probably not follow suit. TimothyJosephWood 15:59, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Hmm...well...
- To be clear, the BBC News reference was actually an anti-reference, but not IMHO a good one: [11] Equating "not officially confirmed" with "fake" just struck me as wrong, and I was commenting on that above. As for the speculative aspect -- I agree, this is tenuous at this time, but since the topic is broached it's no harm to keep track of it here on the talk page. I also think it would be reasonable to say what the witness said he heard, staying as close as possible to the original primary source, and toss in a few more of these refs dangled off of the end of it, but not make more than a sentence out of it, and not make it sound authoritative (i.e. say this witness said...) Wnt (talk) 16:08, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- But the article doesn't discuss rumours propagated by social media. Nice-Matin interviewed a witness who recounted his experiences, whatever value that has. The judiciary seem to have completely ignored it. That's what the article says. The BBC also ignored it. But you get 3 out of 10 for trying to give the impression that your coming here was anything other than an attack on User:John. Although I don't usually agree with him, he is right about the Daily Mail. If we used your "standards" and allowed the Daily Mail as a source, we would have a section of the article on the perpetrator's recent sex partners. Wikipedia according to Wnt. No thanks. Mathsci (talk) 17:39, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- To be clear, the BBC News reference was actually an anti-reference, but not IMHO a good one: [11] Equating "not officially confirmed" with "fake" just struck me as wrong, and I was commenting on that above. As for the speculative aspect -- I agree, this is tenuous at this time, but since the topic is broached it's no harm to keep track of it here on the talk page. I also think it would be reasonable to say what the witness said he heard, staying as close as possible to the original primary source, and toss in a few more of these refs dangled off of the end of it, but not make more than a sentence out of it, and not make it sound authoritative (i.e. say this witness said...) Wnt (talk) 16:08, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
"Or is this a bigoted public trying to press an anti-Muslim narrative onto a killing by someone who just happened to be nominally a member of the religion?" (How dare those evil "bigots" notice patterns!) @Wnt:: The cognitive dissonance here is truly astounding for someone with a userpage emblazoned with quotes like "Journalism means publishing something that others are trying to hide" and "There is a view that one should never be permitted to be criticized for being even possibly in the future engaged in a contributory act that might be immoral, and that that type of arse-covering is more important than actually saving people's lives. That it is better to let a thousand people die than risk going to save them and possibly running over someone on the way. And that is something that I find to be philosophically repugnant." If you can't see why, then you're beyond saving.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 00:58, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- @TheTimesAreAChanging: My point is that there are multiple hypotheses out there. I don't happen to believe that one, but it definitely seems to be implied by some of the news coverage that talks about what a lousy Muslim the perpetrator was. A key concept in science is falsifiability - if you are not able and willing to consider the contrary hypothesis to your theory, then you do not have a theory at all. A practical implementation of that is if the people editing an article all decide he obviously did it out of generic Muslim belief, then covering facts that would back up a jihadist perspective seems to them to be unnecessary. It's not enough to know what you know, you have to prove it, and to teach others all knowledge on a topic a Wikipedia article therefore should aspire to cover all the sourced statements from every point of view. Wnt (talk) 11:17, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Wnt: In case you haven't noticed, there has been a dramatic increase in terrorism worldwide over the past few years, escalating since the rise of Islamic State in 2014. In the United States, for example, 91 Americans have been killed by Islamic terrorists since 2009, versus 3 during 2002-2009; of those, 73 were killed after 2014. (This analysis low-balls the real number by omitting all instances where Americans were killed anywhere besides U.S. soil.) While the U.S. hasn't—yet—been hit nearly as hard as the Middle East and Europe by this new scourge of terrorism, the picture data like this paints is pretty clear: We've reached the point where it strains credulity to continue treating this clear pattern as though it is merely a series of unfortunate coincidences.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 06:52, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- @TheTimesAreAChanging: My point is that there are multiple hypotheses out there. I don't happen to believe that one, but it definitely seems to be implied by some of the news coverage that talks about what a lousy Muslim the perpetrator was. A key concept in science is falsifiability - if you are not able and willing to consider the contrary hypothesis to your theory, then you do not have a theory at all. A practical implementation of that is if the people editing an article all decide he obviously did it out of generic Muslim belief, then covering facts that would back up a jihadist perspective seems to them to be unnecessary. It's not enough to know what you know, you have to prove it, and to teach others all knowledge on a topic a Wikipedia article therefore should aspire to cover all the sourced statements from every point of view. Wnt (talk) 11:17, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Proposal
So, having thoroughly hashed this out (multiple times), maybe this is a middle ground.
I think we can safely ignore a lot of the sources based on reporting a reported report, as far as establishing the veracity (not due weight) of the claim. The French paper seems to be the source for everything, and everything else is just an echo chamber, unless someone can find another independent claim. So why don't we just flatly say exactly what the situation is (shitty paraphrase follows). TimothyJosephWood 18:28, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
On DATE the FRENCH NEWSPAPER reported an interview with an eyewitness who recounted hearing "Allahu Akbar" during the attack.FRENCH CITE This report was referenced by other organizations including The Independent, The Daily Mail, etc., and etc.SOURCES FOR DAYS, with some reporting that multiple witnesses heard the perpetrator shouting the phrase. Officials have not confirmed the report, and the BBC described it's spread on social media as a "fake".BBC
- As discussed above, maybe someone in the street shouted "Allahu Akbar", but I doubt if it was the driver of the truck at 50 MPH, and the sourcing is thin on this.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:09, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, and, as you have pointed out in reference to your own reasoning in this vein, that entire argument is complete WP:OR. TimothyJosephWood 19:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes it's my WP:OR but the sourcing is also thin and contradictory. It may have been down to confusion that some people thought they heard the driver of the truck shout "Allahu Akbar". I'm wary of this going into the article on the basis of the current sourcing and think it is better out than in.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:17, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- As far as veracity goes, there is really only once source: the original interview. TimothyJosephWood 19:29, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes it's my WP:OR but the sourcing is also thin and contradictory. It may have been down to confusion that some people thought they heard the driver of the truck shout "Allahu Akbar". I'm wary of this going into the article on the basis of the current sourcing and think it is better out than in.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:17, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, and, as you have pointed out in reference to your own reasoning in this vein, that entire argument is complete WP:OR. TimothyJosephWood 19:13, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Strong support for including the BBC, but in a revised form. To the best of my comprehension, the BBC described the actual claim as a fake—not its spread on social media (what would that even mean?). The BBC page cites tweet as an example of the "fake". The tweet contains a video of the attack as evidence. This video was taken from nearly the same vantage point as the guy who told Nice-Matin that he heard a shout of "Allahu Akbar". Also note that the the truck is not moving at 50mph when when the alleged "Allah" shout is heard at the 6-sec mark.) Clearly, the tweet with video and the "witness accounts" are referring to the same noise. According to the BBC piece (reasonably interpreted), the noise you hear in the video is not "Allahu Akhbar" and hence they call it a fake. It also seems like there are some men in uniform chasing after the truck. Funny how we've heard nothing from them—just from the guy at the balcony. So to sum up: the BBC has called this "Allahu Akbar" stuff a 100% fake, and this should be stated clearly. Obviously the BBC is an both relevant and reliable here. The rules mandate that it be included, at least until we hear something from the police Guccisamsclub (talk) 19:53, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'm pretty sure the BBC isn't calling the interview with Pepe a fake. TimothyJosephWood 20:21, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- The BBC is calling the claim that the perpetrator shouted "Allahu Akbar" false. Not calling the tweet fake, or an interview, or its social media whatever fake. They are saying that the claim is fraudulent. I recommend you watch the video—as disturbing as it is—if you are still not sure what the BBC is talking about.Guccisamsclub (talk) 20:31, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I'm pretty sure the BBC isn't calling the interview with Pepe a fake. TimothyJosephWood 20:21, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
In response to the confusion about what is being characterized as "fake", here is my proposal:
On DATE the FRENCH NEWSPAPER published an interview with an eyewitness who recounted hearing "Allahu Akbar" during the attack from a balcony,Nice-Matin, with similar reports being circulated by other news organizationsIndependent, Telegraph etc. and in the social mediatweet. Officials have not confirmed these reports, while the BBC has included this claim in a list of "false social media rumors"tweet about the attack.BBC. "This tweeter suggests he can hear Allahu Akbar in the seventh second of this video of the Nice attack", the BBC reported in reference to a tweet sent out shortly after the attack.
I am including the tweet because it is reference in the BBC piece and is an important piece of context here.Guccisamsclub (talk) 21:38, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Had an edit conflict with the below. Do you have a cite for the tweet? TimothyJosephWood 21:47, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Here is the tweet. Same one the BBC clipped.Guccisamsclub (talk) 22:03, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Tweet don't work none. TimothyJosephWood 22:08, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Gosh darn it. Think I got this to work good.Guccisamsclub (talk) 22:52, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- Here is the tweet. Same one the BBC clipped.Guccisamsclub (talk) 22:03, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
- I like it. I mean, if we have to mention it all for some reason. InedibleHulk (talk) 07:15, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I support the first proposal here or the second. It is stretching BLP to quote the BBC's "fake" designation when their remarkable logic is that the lack of a government source makes something fake, and perhaps it would be better to quote them explicitly on that point, but they are a source and they did say it. I repeat that the assumption the vehicle was constantly going 50 MPH right up to the moment the guy was shot is a particularly bad case of WP:OR - and it annoys me when people try to take stuff out with OR that is so much poorer in quality than that which is routinely removed when used to put data in to an article. Wnt (talk) 11:23, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Proposal 2...or 3
Ok, so, version 2, with refs added including clarification that BBC was talking about the video in particular, and not about the original Nice Matin interview.TimothyJosephWood 21:45, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
On 15 July the Nice-Matin reported an interview with an eyewitness who recounted hearing "Allahu Akbar" during the attack.[1] This report was repeated by other outlets including The Daily Mail[2], The Telegraph[3], News 9[4], and Heavy[5] reporting that the phrase was "shouted" by the attacker. Officials have not confirmed the report, and the BBC examined a video purported to include the attacker saying this, among a number of instances of false claims about the incident spread on social media, and called it a "fake".[6]
References
- ^ "'On a entendu plusieurs fois Allah akbar', les témoins racontent après l'attentat de Nice". Nice-Matin (in French). Archived from the original on 15 July 2016. Retrieved 18 July 2016.
- ^ Boyle, Darren; Tonkin, Sam (14 July 2016). "Gun and truck attack leaves at least 80 dead in Nice: Men, women and kids strewn across road after lorry speeds for a MILE through holiday crowd watching fireworks, before gunman opens fire". Daily Mail. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
The truck driver, who was known to police, was said to have shouted 'Allahu Akbar' – God is great in Arabic – before being killed in a clear suicide mission. Pro-ISIS groups have been celebrating the attack, orchestrated to coincide with France's most important national holiday.- ^ Henderson, Barney; Graham, Chris; Gurney-Read, Josie (14 July 2016). "84 killed in Nice by lorry during Bastille Day celebrations – how the attack unfolded". The Telegraph. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
2:19 am 'Driver was 31-year-old from Nice' The local newspaper, Nice-Matin, said the man driving the truck was a 31-year-old Nice resident of Tunisian origin. The truck driver was said to have shouted 'Allahu Akbar' – God is greatest – before being shot dead by police.- ^ Saunokonoko, Mark (18 July 2016). [mohammed-lahouaiej-bouhlel-may-not-be-isil-jihadist-extremist-fighter "Nice attack: ISIL were quick to claim him, but is he really a jihadi soldier?"]. 9 News. Retrieved 18 July 2016.
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value (help)- ^ McBride, Jessica (16 July 2016). "Report: Nice Terror Suspect Shouted 'Allahu Akbar' in Attack". Heavy. Retrieved 18 July 2016.
- ^ Sini, Rozina (15 July 2016). "Nice lorry attack sparks false rumours on social media". BBC News. Retrieved 15 July 2016.
Handgun
Do we know what type of weapon was used? Handgun is a bit colloquial, and I would prefer pistol, but certainly better than both would be the model. TimothyJosephWood 11:32, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Only the caliber, I think. An automatic 7.65 mm pistol and several used and unused 7.65 mm cartridges, was discovered in the truck’s cabin. Ref. nytimes.com. Erlbaeko (talk) 11:55, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Got it. Added. I left out the cite calling it an automatic weapon. They almost certainly mean semi-automatic. TimothyJosephWood 12:19, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I agree. The term "automatic pistol" is used as a synonym for a semi-automatic pistol. However, the cite you added says "a grenade" were found in the cabin. The Guardian says "a dummy grenade were found in the truck...". Erlbaeko (talk) 13:12, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- But he doesn't appear to have attempted to use the grenade in the attack. It's difficult to "find" a grenade after it is used. TimothyJosephWood 13:40, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I agree. The term "automatic pistol" is used as a synonym for a semi-automatic pistol. However, the cite you added says "a grenade" were found in the cabin. The Guardian says "a dummy grenade were found in the truck...". Erlbaeko (talk) 13:12, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Got it. Added. I left out the cite calling it an automatic weapon. They almost certainly mean semi-automatic. TimothyJosephWood 12:19, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I believe other sources confirm, only real weapon was a handgun, grenades and rifles were 'replica'. Why, we have no idea. Pincrete (talk) 13:50, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- They're still scarier than a pistol, presuming he planned on ever leaving the truck. Or the guy who sold them to him didn't want to kill anyone, just his money, so burned him. Or it was one of those entrapment deals where the feds find an angry Muslim online and set him up, but forgot about trucks being weapons, too. InedibleHulk (talk) 14:03, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- A dummy grenade is used for training. It contains no primer or explosive charge. The last part of this video shows the use in a training situation. Erlbaeko (talk) 14:43, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Fake explosives are also frequently used to fool angry people into being arrested for terrorism, when someone needs to justify spending money on an anti-terror campaign. Not saying that's what happened this time, but the state of emergency was about to expire. InedibleHulk (talk) 15:02, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- A dummy grenade is used for training. It contains no primer or explosive charge. The last part of this video shows the use in a training situation. Erlbaeko (talk) 14:43, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- They're still scarier than a pistol, presuming he planned on ever leaving the truck. Or the guy who sold them to him didn't want to kill anyone, just his money, so burned him. Or it was one of those entrapment deals where the feds find an angry Muslim online and set him up, but forgot about trucks being weapons, too. InedibleHulk (talk) 14:03, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I believe other sources confirm, only real weapon was a handgun, grenades and rifles were 'replica'. Why, we have no idea. Pincrete (talk) 13:50, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- It's not always American Muslims getting fooled, either. An anti-Islamic, anti-French Frenchman was sold, then busted with, five Kalashnikovs, 5,000 rounds of ammunition, two rocket launchers, 125kg of TNT, 100 detonators and 20 balaclavas last month. Now that is a scary truckload of useless crap. InedibleHulk (talk) 15:45, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
French Wikipedia: Attentat islamiste en France
The French Wikipedia uses the category: Islamic attack in France. Even if such a categorization is labelled "racist" -- is it not truthful to use the category *Islamic terrorist incident* in this Wikipedia, too? 91.4.77.190 (talk) 08:09, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- There has been a long discussion about this at Talk:List of Islamist terrorist attacks. There have been persistent problems with blaming Islamic terror groups such as ISIL based on early news reports. There is also an interesting article in the New York Times which looks at how to define terrorism in the modern age when a deranged person may be involved.[12]--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 08:16, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Persistent problems"? It's problematic to call an attack "islamic" when an islamic fanaticist murders dozens of people -- but it's not problematic to categorize an opinion as "hate speech" and non-conformists (concerning the media, i.e. the New York Times) as "haters", if the ruling narrative demands it. What a brave new world. Get well soon. 91.4.77.190 (talk) 10:52, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- It's problematic to call it any kind of terrorism before a motive is known. Calling it ISIS-inspired Islamic terrorism breeds fear and hatred of domestic Muslims and support for coalition bombing of the Islamic State. Bombing the Islamic State is problematic because, in addition to killing Islamists, it kills many more suspected Islamists, who looked the part, had ambiguous names or were in the general vicinity. That breeds fear and hate of the coalition among "lone wolves" surrounded by supporters of it, who sometimes turn violent, even on suspected coalition supporters, and are then called ISIS-inspired in the news instead of coalition-inspired, simply because ISIS speaks loudest about stopping coalition bombings, and the wheel keeps turning.
- Wikipedia's purpose is not to stop the cycle, but it is to present only verifiable facts, without spin from either side. If that happens to prevent people from dying terribly, that's an added bonus. If French Wikipedians want to base their Motivation section on tabloid conjecture and summarize that shit in French Wikipedia's voice, that's their problem, editorially and morally. InedibleHulk (talk) 12:03, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- "Persistent problems"? It's problematic to call an attack "islamic" when an islamic fanaticist murders dozens of people -- but it's not problematic to categorize an opinion as "hate speech" and non-conformists (concerning the media, i.e. the New York Times) as "haters", if the ruling narrative demands it. What a brave new world. Get well soon. 91.4.77.190 (talk) 10:52, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- User:91.4.77.190 I don't think anyone thinks the term racist, simply used too readily at times. Pincrete (talk) 09:21, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- At times? Good morning. 91.4.77.190 (talk) 10:54, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Please read the New York Times article mentioned above. We may be witnessing a new kind of terrorist attack where disgruntled or deranged people jump on the radical Islamist bandwagon as a way of justifying their actions. Most people are smart enough not to fall into the "all Muslims are bad" trap when something like this happens. It's true that ISIL is calling for people to carry out attacks and there is no shortage of sickos who would do it, but they are not carrying out the wishes of ordinary Muslims. See also this BBC News video. --♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 11:14, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Some are free enough to not fall for the ruling narrative of falsifications – as long as the majority stays as programmed by the media narrative as today –- and thus preventing proper actions to be taken – these attacks will continue.
- First the rule of lies will get even more extreme –- in some European states you can even be arrested for not thinking like the media and the state wants you to think and daring to make such Internet comments -- you will of course never be prosecuted for echoing the New York Times. 91.4.77.190 (talk) 11:49, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- User:91.4.77.190, I've no idea what you're talking about, but I think it's off-topic. Pincrete (talk) 11:54, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Please read the New York Times article mentioned above. We may be witnessing a new kind of terrorist attack where disgruntled or deranged people jump on the radical Islamist bandwagon as a way of justifying their actions. Most people are smart enough not to fall into the "all Muslims are bad" trap when something like this happens. It's true that ISIL is calling for people to carry out attacks and there is no shortage of sickos who would do it, but they are not carrying out the wishes of ordinary Muslims. See also this BBC News video. --♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 11:14, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- At times? Good morning. 91.4.77.190 (talk) 10:54, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I notice that "Islamist" has been added back to the lead, in the second paragraph: "The incident has been described as the third major Islamist terrorist attack in France since January 2015". The only source provided is The Local. To be NPOV, the majority of sources should refer to it as "Islamist" - for example, the other source cited (NYT) doesn't. I'm not following news reports on this closely, so I leave it to other editors to determine if there is now enough evidence to describe the attacker as "Islamist". If it's described as such in the lead, it should be of course included in the List of Islamist terrorist attacks (currently, it's not). --Nykterinos (talk) 11:56, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- nb 'has been described', not 'is', I think sourcing may be strong enough for that, but I would prefer a more nuanced phrasing. AFAIK, officials are just saying 'some connection to Jihadism but we don't know what'. Pincrete (talk) 12:06, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I don't like it, but just attributed this opinion to The Local for now. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:57, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Hulk, the fix is an improvement, but the underlying question still needs to be asked, how are majority of RS and Fr authorities characterising the 'Islamist' element? The opinion of one paper isn't really para 2 of lead material. Pincrete (talk) 15:27, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- It wasn't supposed to fix anything. Just shift the blame from Wikipedia. Still doesn't belong there. InedibleHulk (talk) 18:44, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- And it sure didn't need the same wire story reference three times, plus two that didn't say it. Shifted blame from The Local to AFP. InedibleHulk (talk) 18:59, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- Hulk, the fix is an improvement, but the underlying question still needs to be asked, how are majority of RS and Fr authorities characterising the 'Islamist' element? The opinion of one paper isn't really para 2 of lead material. Pincrete (talk) 15:27, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- I don't like it, but just attributed this opinion to The Local for now. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:57, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- nb 'has been described', not 'is', I think sourcing may be strong enough for that, but I would prefer a more nuanced phrasing. AFAIK, officials are just saying 'some connection to Jihadism but we don't know what'. Pincrete (talk) 12:06, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
FYI
RfCs are for OUTSIDE input, not input from those who started the controversy. And an IP address is not required. For any questions look at Wikipedia:Requests for comment 107.147.214.139 (talk) 21:39, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- "All editors (including IP users) are welcome to respond to any RfC." Besides, you started. InedibleHulk (talk) 21:55, July 20, 2016 (UT
- User:107.147.214.139 Do not remove other people's comments from the talk page EVER. Outside contributors are invited to an RfC, but involved parties (inc you) are entitled to contribute to the discussion. … … … btw, you do realise that an RfC normally runs for 30 days, has to be closed by an uninvolved editor and the change cannot be made while the RfC is running unless there is consensus to do so! Sure you don't just want to discuss this without the RfC? Pincrete (talk) 22:04, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
I wanted to get the opinions of third parties because the debate had stalled. Hulk commenting defeats the ENTIRE purpose of RfCs and dispute resolution in general. It is to get outside input and while it's not against the rules for involved parties to post, it doesn't make any sense whatsoever to do so. I don't get the point. And it very clearly states that you do not need to include your IP address when posting an RfC, so I don't think it was necessary to retroactively add one. 107.147.214.139 (talk) 23:31, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
- It doesn't defeat the purpose, it's perfectly normal and it gives 'new arrivals' a chance to evaluate the arguments presented. No harm done. RfCs encourage new opinions, they don't exclude involved ones. Signing is no big deal, only people want to know who has posted. Pincrete (talk) 00:47, 21 July 2016 (UTC)