Talk:2016 Monaco Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing this one as part of backlog drive. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Remove the second link to Formula One

 Done

Background

• FIA should be spelt out in full since its mentioned once
• Link Drivers' Championship to List of Formula One World Drivers' Champions
• It would be appropriate to link Constructors' standings to List of Formula One World Constructors' Champions
• Daniel Ricciardo is linked twice, remove the second link

All  Done

Free practice

• "two ninety-minute practice and one sixty-minute session were held before qualifying on Saturday." - change to 90-minute and 60-minute

The way it is now is well within the regulations of WP:NUMNOTES.

• "in order to minimize road-closure disruptions to local residents." - change to Minimise

 Done

• Remove the Sebastian Vettel and Lewis Hamilton wikilinks

 Done Removed all duplinks in the article

Qualifying

• "all drivers except for the Force Indias went out on the ultrasoft tyres to set their first lap times." - can be either Force India cars or drivers

 Done

• " it were the two Manors of Rio Haryanto and Pascal Wehrlein," - ditto

 Done

• Delink Max Verstappen, Joylon Palmer, Jenson Button and Rio Haryanto as all four men are linked in the earlier Free Practice sub-section
• Same for Felipe Massa, Valtteri Bottas, Kimi Räikkönen, Fernando Alonso, Romain Grosjean, and Williams

Race

• All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport slang

 Done

• "for intermediates over the following laps." - intermediate tyres

 Done

• "Another VSC period was called while both Saubers pitted to repair damages," - change to either Sauber cars or drivers

 Done

• Remove the link to the 2008 race since its linked in the background sub-section

Post-race

• Delink Toto Wolff as he is linked in the background sub-section
• "since his slower pace was due to low temperatures in his tyres." - I believe rewording it low tyre temperatures would be better

 Done

That's what I found. On hold MWright96 (talk) 14:38, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thank you for your review! I believe it is all taken care of. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:24, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

@Zwerg Nase: Yes it has. Promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:45, 5 August 2016 (UTC)