Talk:2016 FIA GT World Cup
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 15:29, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
Will review this soon . Kpgjhpjm 15:29, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- The 2016 FIA GT World Cup (formally the SJM Macau GT Cup – FIA GT World Cup) was the second annual edition of the event and the ninth time overall that Grand Touring machinery competed in the autonomous territory of Macau in GT3-specification cars.
- The lead looks odd - rewrite to The 2016 FIA GT World Cup (formally the SJM Macau GT Cup – FIA GT World Cup) was a (series) race held at (place)
- Then you can write - It was the second running of the race and the ninth time overall that Grand Touring machinery competed in the autonomous territory of Macau.
- Vanthoor got ahead of his teammate Edoardo Mortara on the rolling start and kept the lead for the rest of the race to win. The main race had Vanthoor lead the first four laps but he lost the first position to Earl Bamber in a Manthey Racing-entered Porsche 911 GT3 R after a red flag was needed to clear the track for repairs to a barrier an accident on lap one.
- These two above do not match - did you mean qualifying race in the green part .
- Vanthoor got passed by Bamber on lap 5 - the lap on which the red flag was thrown . Vanthoor crashed on lap 5 under red flag ?
- @Kpgjhpjm: Have done all of the above points raised so far. MWright96 (talk) 14:19, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
Entry list
[edit]- No problem
Background
[edit]- No problems
Practice and qualifying
[edit]- late lap of two minutes and 19.253 seconds . What is late lap ?
- @Kpgjhpjm: Have taken action on your latest point and have removed that term. MWright96 (talk) 08:23, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
- Vanthoor whose best lap was 0.154 seconds slower than Mortara.
- Remove the green words .
- they separated Marchy Lee in fourteenth to they were separated by Marchy Lee in fourteenth .
Qualifying race
[edit]- Why/how did Mortara spin ?
- created a staggered race for all competitors - what is meant by staggered .
=Main race
[edit]- Bamber's overtaking manoevure forced Engel to make contact with the barrier at Reservoir Bend in the process - on whom did Bamber try to make an overtaking manoeuvre ?
- contacting the tyre barriers to made contact with the tyre barriers .
- How the marshal got injured ?
- underneath of Vanthoor's car to floor of Vanthoor's car
Comments
[edit]@MWright96: The review is done . Kpgjhpjm 13:03, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Kpgjhpjm: Have done all of the points apart from the one concerning the marshals as the source stated that he was merely injured. MWright96 (talk) 15:57, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
- Promoting . Kpgjhpjm 01:00, 18 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Kpgjhpjm: Have done all of the points apart from the one concerning the marshals as the source stated that he was merely injured. MWright96 (talk) 15:57, 17 November 2018 (UTC)