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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City. - "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch.
The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million - reads oddly
The Football Association charged him with misconduct. ....aaaand the punishment was....?
Earwig's copyvio okay - false positive due to some quotes.

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2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

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5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:


Overall:

Pass or Fail: - a couple of minor prose issues. Fixed a couple of typoes I couldn't be arsed noting here (and were straightforward). Nice work. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Casliber thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
All good/nice work Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:36, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]