Talk:2006 Heineken Cup final/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:12, 18 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"rugby union's primary club competition" is this verifiable?
- I'm sure it is, I just can't find a source that says it outright.
  - It needs to be verifiable. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:39, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - I'm not sure it does. It's like saying the Champions League is UEFA's top club competition, it's just the way it is. – PeeJay 12:59, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
      - No, that would have to be reliably sourced. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:03, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
        Added a reliable source to verify the claim MWright96 (talk) 10:50, 30 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"by the European Rugby Champions Cup after" overlinked.
- Fixed.
"the inaugural final in 1996" I would put "inaugural final in" inside the link.
- Done.
"French club would play" ... club played ...
- Done.
"installed as the favourites" by whom?
- I've deleted that entire sentence.
"for the quarter-finals. The four quarter-final" repetitive.
- Fixed.
"Saracens, Ulster in pool" and Ulster.
- Fixed.
"scoring four tries to " link try.
- Try is already linked above.
"at Ravenhill on" seems to be piped to a redirect.
- Fixed.
Link penalty goal.
- Fixed.
"converted" link?
- This just links back to the Try (rugby) page. It can be linked, but would it not count as overlinking?
  - I don't think that's a major problem when linking up two very different jargon terms to rugby aficionados. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:39, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"would become the" became the.
- Fixed.
" victory.[32] Paul O'Connell, a lock" overlinked and link lock.
- Fixed and reworded.
"Fly-half" link.
- Done.
"one.”[36] Damien Traille predicted" overlinked.
- Fixed.
"hooker" link.
- Done.
"would have saw" would have seen.
- Done.
Is there a link for rugby's offside?
- Yes.
Link scrum.
- Done.
"with Benjamin Noirot for" overlinked.
- Fixed.
"Munster got a last" were awarded a
- Reworded.
"Stringer took the penalty" which he missed?
- No, he booted it into touch.
  - It should say that. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:39, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - It does. – Pee Jay 12:59, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tomás O'Leary is missing his diacritic.
- Fixed.
"win - we lost" en-dash.
- Fixed.
"was nominated and named" is "nominated and" necessary?
- Fixed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:02, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've made most of the changes you recommended. Just need an opinion on linking to Conversion (rugby), which could be seen as overlinking to Try (rugby). – Pee Jay 15:25, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

PeeJay still waiting for that reference for the "premier" cup competition (which also only appears to be mentioned in the lead, and not in the main body, which is also an oversight). The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:50, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Added reference to verify "premier" cup claim MWright96 (talk) 10:58, 30 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]