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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:16, 4 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello User:Hurricanehink. I will be reviewing this article tonight. After skimming through, I must say, nice job! When I first saw it, I was like, "damn, this is way better than the 2002 NIO." However, there are a few minor issues with I would like you to address/fix within the next week.--12george1 (talk) 03:17, 4 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Maybe you should mention in the lede whether the season was inactive, average, or above average. Judging by the information I added to the 2002 NIO, this season was also inactive. If not in the lede, you should definitely mention this in the season summary
  • " It is possible that the storm contributed to a deadly heatwave in India due to shifting air currents." - Not sure if heatwave is one word or two, but the article title has heat wave as two words. Also, wikilink India, since you have wikilinked Sri Lanka and Myanmar.
  • Death toll is too low in the infobox. Here's the death toll for each TC: 254 for BOB 01 (Sri Lanka), 21 for BOB 04, 19 for BOB 05, and 83 for BOB 07. 254 + 21 + 19 + 83 = 377
  • "weakening over land, passing near the Andoman and Nicobar Islands" - Andoman Islands? Never heard of them :P
  • "Local news reports indicated that the storm produced 10 ft (3.0 m) waves as it moved ashore," - Why did you have feet first here? It should be head first. Jk :P Meters/metres should go first if you are using metric units throughout the article.
  • Again, nice work Hurricanehink! After these issues are fixed/addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this article and list it as a Good Article. Regards,--12george1 (talk) 03:16, 4 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]