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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2001 Honda Indy 300/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 17:27, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this article as well . Kpgjhpjm 17:27, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Background

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Practice and qualifying

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  • Change the section header from Practice and qualification to Practice and qualifying
  • Change and 57.751 seconds effort to and 57.751 seconds lap
  • leading championship point-standing leaders and the fastest two drivers from the previous road course race composing the second group - Please reword this sentence and what about the first group ?
  • Bräck thirteenth after changing his car's front wheel and front-left suspension wishbone - Why did Bräck change these things ?

Warm-up

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Race

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  • Swintal waved the green flag at 13:57 - Who is Swintal ?
  • but he continued - Remove the word he
  • sixth and eighth positions. --> sixth and eighth positions respectively
  • fourth and sixth --> fourth and sixth positions respectively
  • Team Penske owner Roger Penske suggested to de Ferran over the radio that he cede fourth place to Bräck, but de Ferran was hesitant to do so as he felt his car was faster than Bräck's despite his braking problems. Tracy passed de Ferran to take over the fifth position on the 55th lap - Did Bräck pass de Ferran before Tracy passed de Ferran ?

Post-race

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Comments

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