Talk:2000 San Marino Grand Prix

2000 San Marino Grand Prix is currently a Other sports good article nominee. Nominated by EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) at 20:27, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

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Nominator: EnthusiastWorld37 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 04:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article. I'll note upfront that if you disagree/don't understand my comment, push back/ask. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 04:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Leaving some initial comments below.

Prose and content

Formula One World Championship, and the season's Remove the comma, per WP:CINS
run four laps longer than Häkkinen during his second stint. step this out so it is clearer for a lay reader, given it is the lede.
I would like to see it mentioned mentioned in the lede who ultimately won the 2000 Formula One World Championship to give a full context for the race, although I understand if this is not normal practice for articles of this type.
practiced starts for durability purposes could you explain this to me?
shookdown link shakedown (testing)
while McLaren scored no points due to their unreliable car, and driver David Coulthard was disqualified better use of conjunctions, as it appears Coulthard was on a separate team to McLaren.
possible world championship victory,[21] but Ferrari improvements different conjunction, inappropriate SYNTH, implications for Schumacher celebrating a possible world championship victory
admitted WP:SAID
with a concentration on active voice for concision

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 04:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]