Talk:1st Mounted Division

Suggestions for improvement

I have just completed the B class checklist and feel that this article could be improved. Some ideas for improvment are:

• images;
• expanded narrative;
• in line citations and expanded reference base.

If anyone can help with these, that would be great. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:34, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

@AustralianRupert, how does it look now? I have taken the liberty of re-rating as I think it now passes B1 and B2. What do you think? Hamish59 (talk) 13:49, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

@Hamish59: G'day, Hamish, it looks pretty good to me. My only suggestion would be to include some of the information that is currently in the last paragraph of the lead in the body of the article as well. Thanks for your efforts. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 18:20, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

Good idea, @AustralianRupert:. I included the information in the lede to clarify the multiple divisions with the same name. That said, the lede should be a summary of the article and, as it stands at the moment, it is not. Grins. Hamish59 (talk) 18:31, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

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