Talk:1952 World Snooker Championship/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:25, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"The 1952 World Snooker Championship was a snooker tournament held between Monday 25 February and Saturday 8 March 1952" - the days aren't really needed here
- Changed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:15, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"at Houldsworth Hall in Manchester, England" - comma missing after the word "Hall"
- Changed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:15, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"In winning the event, Lindrum became the first player from outside the British Isles to win the tournament," - repetition of "win"
- Changed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:15, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"with some only counting Robertson's win due to the field of just two players." - what is meant by "some" in this context?
- Sorry, Historians. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:15, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Due to a dispute between the Professional Billiards Players' Association (PBPA) and the organisers for the event, the Billiards Association and Control Council (BACC), most players withdrew from the event." - repetition of "event"
- Covered Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:36, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink the term frame to the relevant article only on the first mention not on any other subsequent mentions
- Covered Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:36, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The term round-robin will also be wikilinked to the correct article
"McConachy had performed badly, losing all eight matches"' - McConachy was defeated in each of the eight games he played
- Covered Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:36, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Wikilink of the BACC in the third paragraph is unneeded but the word table can be to Billiard table

"Lindrum won eight of the next twelve to lead 14–10 after the second day's play." - a word is missing from this sentence
"Day five featured Lindrum extend his lead to 38–22 after day five," - The fifth day saw
"needing just two of the remaining 37 for victory." - a word is missing from this excerpt
"Lindrum won the first two frames to reach a winning 73–37 position on the 6 March."- on 6 March. per MOS:DATES
"The remaining 35 "dead" frames were due to be played," - dead frames
"Lindrum became the first player from outside the British Isles to win the World Championship, and would remain the only one until compatriot Neil Robertson won the event in 2010.[22]" - the fact of Robertson's 2010 victory will need an additional reliable source to verify it along with the one already at the end of this sentence
- All covered. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:56, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References 1, 7 and 11 are missing their page numbers
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
References 2 and 23 are duplicates of each other
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
References 7, 20, 22, 26 and 27 should mention that they are from Trove using the via= field
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
References 4, 6 and 12 to 19 and 21 should mention they were from Google Newspapers using the via= field
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The work in Reference 20 should be cleaned up to say The Mercury not "Mercury (Hobart, Tas. : 1860 – 1954)"
- Done this one. Will pick up the remainder when at a PC. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:59, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Am putting the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query each of the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 19:04, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

- I think that's everything covered now MWright96. Thanks for the review once again Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Lee Vilenski: Have made various changes to two incomplete refs; now promoting this article to GA status MWright96 (talk) 15:45, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]