Talk:1934 Bolivian coup d'état/GA1
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Reviewer: Catlemur (talk · contribs) 18:26, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Krisgabwoosh: I will begin this review shortly.--Catlemur (talk) 18:26, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
- Add a reference to Note a.
- The coup happened within the context of the Chaco War. I think the article would benefit greatly from a paragraph about said war so that the information could be better contextualized.
- "Salamanca's questionable military decisions" - Can you provide some examples?
- You need to add a United States public domain tag for all the images in the article.
- "The authors of the coup" - Reword this.
- Quotes that are longer than forty words or a few hundred characters should be enclosed in "blockquote" per MOS:BLOCKQUOTE.
- Remove the second wikilink for La Razón.
- How did the coup affect the course of the war?
- What was the reaction of neighbouring nations to the coup?
- Footnotes 10 should be pp. 75–76 instead of p. 75–76.
- Remove the Refbegin and Refend indentation from Bibliography.
- The titles of all sources that are written in a language other than English need to be translated (including footnotes 22 and 23).
- Mention that Jayucubas: comentarios y cronicas de la Guerra del Chaco is written in Spanish like you do in the rest of the Bibliography.--Catlemur (talk) 10:44, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
- I guess you could have at least told me that you are not interest in continuing with the review. Oh well.--Catlemur (talk) 09:28, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- Oh gosh, apologies. For some reason I was not notified of the original review. I'd be happy to make the necessary changes if you'd be willing to reopen the nomination. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 09:50, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Krisgabwoosh: You got a talkpage notification about the review and I pinged you after you failed to respond a week later. Go ahead and adress the issues I highlighted. You can renominate the article if you need to.--Catlemur (talk) 17:39, 23 January 2022 (UTC)