Talk:1934 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 21:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will do this one tonight. Noah^Talk 21:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Central America storm is linked twice in the lead
You should add a note stating that all monetary values are in 1934 unless otherwise stated and tack it to the first mention of money in the lead.
"wrought catastrophic rainfall that caused an enormous loss of life" I feel this would be better worded as "resulting in"
Link US and Texas
"a hurricane struck Texas and killed 19 people as a result of tornadoes and storm surge" --> a hurricane struck Texas, spawning tornadoes and generating storm surge, killing 19 people
Minimal death count is off by 10
"but maintaining status as an extratropical cyclone until late on June 21." this seems to be missing a word. I would also say where it dissipated as well.
Abbreviate inches
"After crossing Florida into the Gulf of Mexico" Something just doesn't resonate well with this... --> "After crossing over Florida and into the Gulf of Mexico" ?
"occurred in communities through central Texas" Throughout
"It failed to intensify over the next few days and instead degenerated to a tropical wave" This should be reworded since it could have already been a TW when it arrived there.
Abbreviate miles
"Several streams overflowed." Could this somehow be incorporated into the previous sentence?
Link trough
"Two buildings were electrically charged for unknown reasons during the storm" Did this injure anyone or cause damage?

That should be it. Noah^Talk 02:55, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've addressed your concerns. I removed the bit about TS Four possibly being a tropical wave as it moved through the islands since, officially, it's recognized as a tropical storm. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 19:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I corrected a few minor items that were missed. Is good to go now. Noah^Talk 19:48, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]