Talk:1869 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:27, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:27, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found, now that work is done:

Tropical Storm Four says the track is unknown, yet the infobox picture shows the track quite clearly; I'm confused by the disparity.
Ref #1 is showing the publisher= thing on screen; fix that.

Only two issues I found. I'll put this on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:29, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I fixed the second thing. As for TS 4, it says the entire track is unknown, which is true. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:37, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

When I read that the entire track is unknown, then it implies in my mind that we don't know anything about it; the storm above it uses the same language yet has no track at all, which contributes to this confusion. I'd reword it to 'parts of the track or unknown' to make it clearer. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:41, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think it's not that important anyway, so I just removed that sentence in question. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:48, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. Article now passes GA status. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:51, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Cool! Thanks a lot. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:57, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]