Talk:10 Minutes (Inna song)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 02:27, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for a review as I feel bad about falling one of your other GANs. I will get to this either later in the week or next week. Aoba47 (talk) 02:27, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Thank you! You don't have to feel "bad" about failing my GAN lol :) Actually, I nominated it as a non-contributor as I thought it would be ready for GA. Thanks anyway for that review; I will maybe find time to fix your issues and renominate again... Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No worries; it is a short article so it does not take a long time to review. Good luck with your current and future projects. Aoba47 (talk) 19:01, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

I would expand upon the following sentence (It was also regarded as a departure from her past work.). How is the song a departure from her previous work? Who regards the work as a departure (i.e. music critics, fans, Inna, Play & Win)?
Great work with the infobox.

Background and composition

I would revise this part (, with them also receiving credits as featured artists) to (, and they also received credit as featured artists).
For this sentence (It was leaked before its release.), do you know the date in which the song was leaked?

Reception

Please expand on the following sentence (Neeti Sarkar, writing for The Hindu, praised "10 Minutes") to identify what was praised about the song.
Please include information about the song's appearance on the year-end chart in Romania (i.e. its placement at 42).
Otherwise, good work with this part.

Music video and promotion

For this part (and mainly continues with her dancing in a club and), I would remove "mainly" as it not necessary.

Release and radio history

Do you know the label that released the song for radio play in Romania (i.e. the second row in the chart)?

External links

Please include a link to the music video here.

Final comments

Great work on this article. Once all of my comments are addressed, I will pass this as a GA. Hope you have a wonderful day or night! Aoba47 (talk) 19:00, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Thank you (again) for reviewing one of my GANs! I believe I done all you suggested to. Regarding your questions: 1) the source on the song being leaked onto the Internet doesn't tell which date it was; 2) the label for the radio release isn't known, as the ref doesn't provide any further info. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:47, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing my comments, and your responses to those two points make perfect sense to me. I will promote this to a GA. I will probably take a break from reviewing your GANs for the time being as it is always best to get a new set of eyes on one's reviews. Good luck with your current and future projects. Aoba47 (talk) 22:20, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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