Draft talk:Polka Dot Alley

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Randal K is Randal N. Kazarian. - UtherSRG (talk) 16:36, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello:

I believe I have made the necessary changes to remove the maintenance template on my draft page but cannot figure out how to remove the notice.

Thank you, Randal Randal K (talk) 17:10, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Randal K: Sentences such as "Shot in 720p high-definition with Panasonic HVX-200 cameras, the film utilizes closeup filming techniques..." don't seem neutral to me, and it's possible that some sections could be merged together, Rusty4321 ^{talk contribs} 17:26, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Also, please don't copy content directly from the official website. (result from Earwig's Copyvio Detector) Rusty4321 ^{talk contribs} 17:28, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Rusty:

Regarding Draft:Polka Dot Alley

I have spent the last 2 months reviewing in depth upwards of 30 Wikipedia film articles for language and formatting examples and I believe I have edited Draft:Polka Dot Alley to reflect how other film articles have been written.

Please see my latest edit and let me know if it is ready to be published to Wiki’s standards.

If it is my only questions would be 1] what category should I choose, 2] should a header be added such as: “POLKA DOT ALLEY 2015 American film,” and 3] how does a draft become a live article?

Thank you,

Randal Kazarian Randal K (talk) 17:10, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Randal K: Hello again.

A header should not be added generally.

Unfortunately, I haven't seen much improvement on the page. A lot of the content still seems to be copied from other websites. Also, I didn't see any change in the headers and formatting like I asked. Rusty 🐈 23:31, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Rusty

i don’t under stand what you mean by changes to headers and formatting. 2600:8802:5307:1F00:55E0:4285:CF70:79B1 (talk) 23:53, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For example, take a look at Joy (2015 film) and notice how it doesn't have any of those uppercase headers. Also, the name of an episode is not "LA MARIPOSA BLANCA", it's "La Mariposa Blanca". Rusty 🐈 00:00, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Rusty

I did file a Wikimedia VRTS release generator [Ticket#2024082710016838] for the theatrical release poster.

I have also made the changes to the headers and formatting as you requested.

Thank you, Randal K Randal K (talk) 19:35, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Randal K: Also, you seem to have been logged out. Please log in with your account here or at the top-right corner. Rusty 🐈 00:01, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]