Draft talk:Masaki Takata
Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: he is notable, but the page needs a little work. Please add sources which are more independent. Currently they are all too closely associated with him. Also, please try and find a way to cite his publication record better as it is strong. I will also suggest adding a picture of him to the infobox.
Ldm1954 (talk) 12:05, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: You have added sources that do not validate the statements in the texf. That is highly inappropriate.