Draft talk:Fraccaroli Castle

Autumn 2024 Educational Project Page

This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

LIUCgiuli27
Liucmicol01
RiccardoD.LIUC
LIUCstampa1
Lu13.plati
LIUCAmanjot1
su13.koroma

Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk) 14:02, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on Draft 1/11/24

@LIUCgiuli27, Liucmicol01, RiccardoD.LIUC, LIUCstampa1, Lu13.plati, LIUCAmanjot1, and Su13.koroma:

text has been inserted above the draft banner tag. This tag needs to be moved to the top of the page: AfC submission|t||ts=20241025161912|u=Liucmicol01|ns=118|demo=}}
there are 3 grammatical errors in the first line of text
Needs an Infobox: find a relevant Infobox template from Wikipedia:List of infoboxes and Template:Infobox building, and use this templare correctly, or find a similar page with a relevant Infobox, and use this. Note that these are templates with rules on how they are used and for acceptable field content/format
note the guidelines and good practice on lead (or introductory) sections, and look at good practice on other pages. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Use this to develop this section. See also Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Lead_section.

Limelightangel (talk) 14:59, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

the lead section has no sources
the Infobox has a red error related to an image
the section on Legend' has fundamental issues:
- it has no sources
- the section header is unclear
- the style is unacceptable: 'The strange thing is that'; 'however'; etc. See the relevant sections in Wikipedia:Manual of Style
- structure: it is located in the wrong part of the page
- the content was added without the user logging in
the Template:Infobox building has been used but many of the availble fields not been used

Limelightangel (talk) 20:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]