Draft talk:Berkhamsted child rape network
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Proposed rewrite
[edit]I've had look at the proposed rewrite at Talk:Berkhamsted child rape network/Temp, and I'm afraid it still contains many phrases copied (for no good reason) from the sources – please see here. These might perhaps not be enough to trigger an alarm in a new article, but in this case they are simply the remnants of the earlier copying of non-free content, and so need to be removed. Will you deal with that or do you want me to? Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 21:34, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Justlettersandnumbers, please identify exactly which phrases you believe are in the article "for no good reason" in the table below. Tots & little ones matter! (talk) 23:20, 23 January 2019 (UTC)
Reason this page was made a draft
[edit]This page was blanked out as a copyright violation and changed to a draft largely because it had names of criminal offences, prison sentences and quotes by judges and investigators which exactly matched text in some of its referenced sources. These matches triggered a copyright violation alert.
I have improved the copyvio score mainly by removing most names of criminal offences. However, I was told the page continues to be considered ineligible for inclusion in Wikipedia for copyright reasons. The phrases still considered a copyright violation are in the table below:
| Match | Purpose | Source(s) |
|---|---|---|
| Hertfordshire Constabulary's Child Online Safeguarding Team | Proper noun | Hertfordshire Constabulary |
| "more than 50 other law enforcement agencies" | Quoting a person | IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, BBC |
| "no stone has been left unturned" | Quoting a person | Hertfordshire Constabulary, BBC |
| in the criminal justice system | Quoting a person, Technical term, Already in Wikipedia | IBTimes |
| "time and again to read about and sift through the evidence and detail of sexual depravity, very often involving children" | Quoting a person | IBTimes |
| face a "lifetime of difficulties" | Quoting a person | BBC |
| "mercilessly exploited children for his own sexual gratification" | Quoting a person | IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Gov.UK |
| "reflects the disturbing nature of his actions" | Quoting a person | IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary |
| "It was clear that Child cynically manipulated and took advantage of her for many years." | Quoting a person | Sussex Police, Bexhill Observer |
| six years and eight months | Prison sentence | Hemel Today |
| found guilty on 7 December | Date of conviction | BBC |
| the sex offenders' register for life | Criminal penalty | Hemel Today |
| Sexual Harm Prevention Order | Proper noun | Sussex Police, Bexhill Observer, Hemel Today, Mix96 |
| five years and three months | Prison sentence | IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC, CPS.Gov.UK |
| was increased to seven and a half years | Prison sentence | Herts Advertiser, Sussex Police (Coincidence: Bruce Child also sentenced to seven and a half years), Bexhill Observer (Coincidence: Bruce Child also sentenced to seven and a half years) |
| licence. Lady Justice Macur said | Two different paragraphs, should not matter | Herts Advertiser |
| "did not adequately reflect the total criminality of Robert Lindsay" | Quoting a person | Herts Advertiser |
| "will have had a devastating and lasting effect on their victims" | Quoting a person | Gov.UK |
| sexual activity with a child | Criminal offence | IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC, Gov.UK, CPS.Gov.UK, Hemel Today |
| sentenced to two years | Prison sentence | Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC |
| category B images | Criminal offence | The Comet |
| 20 category C images | Criminal offence | The Comet |
Tots & little ones matter! (talk) 23:13, 23 January 2019 (UTC)