Draft:What is War? (Article)

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Declined by Staraction 39 days ago. Last edited by Staraction 39 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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'What is war?' is a article that was written by Jap Tccej. It's an editorial article, talked about the war. The article takes a neutral stance to describe about the war. What the article wants to bring out is to tell the reader to keep peaceful.

Chapter

The first and second chapter, is to explain what the 'war' is, chapter three is talking about consequences and needs. Chapter four is talking about "How to finish the war".^[1]

The chapter 5-6 is the summary.

Source (External link)

https://www.penana.com/story/136596/what-is-war-editoria (Main article)

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